Black Poetry : rEbIrTh...

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  1. baller

    baller Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Pains of disgust staggered me
    …enveloped me
    As uterine contractions
    Forced me from the belly of my desolation
    Through dilated walls of vaginal expanse
    From ovums of hopelessness

    New Birth awaited me.

    Slowly…
    I journeyed down fallopian tubes
    Of manic distress
    ‘til immersed in the quiet serenity of
    Untapped happiness

    The amber richness of
    Twilight’s last gleam
    Touched me
    …brazenly caressed me
    In the wee hours of my
    Solitude…
    Its brash rudeness softened my heart
    As waves of misplaced anger departed me
    Leaving me…destitute
    Devoid of the negativity
    Days long adventure bestowed upon me

    No longer does the disease of
    Emotional starvation
    Or mental deprivation
    Attack me
    No longer do tentacles of despair
    Reach out to me
    …haunt me
    With visions of
    “Never will be”
    Happiness

    With dawn’s early light

    {There is…}

    Rebirth.
     
  2. redlady

    redlady Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    yo baller! i was feeling this! alright now! get your flow on big man!
     
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    SwtT Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    very nice. flow on
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    man BALLER u slap a deep one on me i was feelin it
    to da end .....do ya thang bru !
    tyght
     
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    WORD IS BORN

    Baller, REBIRTH is a sure nuff winner!

    1poetsought ~
     
  6. baller

    baller Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    with each days light, i am refreshed.

    THANKS for reading me.:)

    oNeNeSs
     
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    cocobutterskyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Awww.... the peace of newness

    feelin'it souldeep
    Coco
    :heart:
     
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    baller Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    c & c...THANKS for feeling me on the rebirth of my happiness...on my quest for beautiful tomorrows.:) GLAD you liked it.

    peace&manyblessings
     
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