Black Poetry : Rebirth of a Poet III (Dialogue)

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  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Living at the end of tyme
    upon the hope and the minds
    dewelling on the edge
    in da spinster of mastery
    da poet weave a tapestry

    Upon the glist of faith
    words leak to canvas
    painting da picture of morrow
    between light and darkness
    spool in the life entwine fate

    Poetic loom webs cross da room
    beyond mercy lyrics in rapid fire
    measured to perfection,moderately cooked
    concieved thoughts to the mind
    the pen inks da poets heart

    Vessels of manipulation been consumed
    with cordial enthusiasm to well done, Bravo
    dailogue written in blood under static air
    rebirth awaken to the maze of action
    rising above traction and curiousity wit confidence

    Completely crushing waves promoted
    the blood of ink poet scribe under pal weight
    filling the void all empty tombs and structures
    his pen become of formality
    mind normality which bring beauty
    never releasing the spark nor hope as he live

    The yearn is a burning devotion
    every drop of ink is life and life's inspiration
    he become the secret of midnight skies
    embracing the sultry sigh in da silvery song
    what seen a ghost is not forth he has arrived

    HE LIVE............................................:deal: ​
     
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    nevar Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i truly loved the continuation of your rebirth of a poet. do continue on my brotha.:love:
     
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    This is hott poet
    One of your best have to read the other two
    Much Love Poet
     
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    Thankz Nevar i have the final chapter coming soon
    to say he live and here to stay !

    Thankz Tantrum do read the first two to see how i came to this point
    of a rebirth of an poet ........final chapter coming soon.
     
  5. GHETTOAMBITION

    GHETTOAMBITION Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    HECK YEAH! HE LIVES 4EVA LOL, YO I WAZ FEELIN DAT AND I LUV IT 2, MY BRATHA U KNO U GOT MADSKILLZ

    BLACKLUV AND BP
     
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    ahhhh yes sista happy u felt it and your words of kindness
    is felt too thank u so much for all the lovin support you give
    and gave .........makes a person day so much sweeter thank u.
     
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    GHETTOAMBITION Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ahhhhh but bratha u r welcum cuz it iz u dat i stanks 4 givin me appreciationz and blackluv

    blackluv and bp
     
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    two poet's in one beat ....likewise
     
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    stay tune for the final chapter pt.4 Rebirth....................
     
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    "Poetic loom webs cross da room
    beyond mercy lyrics in rapid fire
    measured to perfection,moderately cooked
    concieved thoughts to the mind
    the pen inks da poets heart "

    beyond reason beyond sanity
    the poet dwells and looms
    under the cherry blossoms
    and into the murky deep

    for we stumble but few fall without taking flight
    the struggle goes on
    the pen dries up
    the paper crumbles

    who behaves as i creep
    while moonlit embers shadow my thoughts
    hot overpriced
    covercharges and then some

    save it put it in the pocket for later
    and join in a place where all is welcome

    without paying a dime to get in
    we grow
    we dip
    we dive

    on love, vibe energy
    the poetic flow and creative sow ...

    dang i lost my flow sorri fam
     
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