Black Poetry : REBIRTH of a Poet II

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  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    In da garden
    a translucent aspiration of vision
    the handz of tri-color revealed
    a multi rose of perfectional mystic

    Thee poet writes his reservation
    cross the ivory keys in waves
    on the shores of cruel rejection
    scampering in depth of confusion

    Stain pages lay in the life of rebirth
    where freedom words take it's worth
    persistent and the love cascade on integrity
    he rise from abandoned morn

    Desires envelops his senses beyond illusive roses
    fragile heart yet delicated displayed in warmth
    the ink leaks lyrics in velvet design scribed
    poetry now standing in dimension of tyme

    A momentary silence inside the chambers of mind
    solitary peace allowed to unwind
    as the structure is brushed on canvas of time
    while u read the poet's Rhythm & Rhyme

    Eyez glazed in the sunlight view
    cross the perception , lavender violets in profusion
    emotions sparks an electrical charge
    in the expansive fields poeticly on the horizon

    HE LIVES..........................................

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    nevar Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    yes i love this continuation of a Poet 2. you truly are a talented writer got my vote as being your fan. when that book coming out man!!!!!!!!!! (smile):love:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Thank u so dearly , from one fan to another i too love your art
    how u craft it and bring it to minds .......The Rebirth has arrived
     
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    Such vividly beautiful images in this one Rich, enjoyed trying to envision this myself.
     
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    Thank u watz i'm sure u saw what i did and the rise of the rebirth
    a poet's hands never still the mind always moving continue to envision
    it feels good .
     
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    This here be makin' me want to be a better poet for real.
    You got skillz poet.
    Long live the poet.
    One love
     
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    Thank you skrybble7 for the high praise
    let me add that it take a great poet to notice a good poet
     
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    just make sure this rebirth continues on my rich.:luvv:
     
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    sure thing pt.3 coming next
     
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    YO I JUS GOT MAD BLACK LUV 4 YO WORK, U R SO ADVANCED IN YO SKILLZ OF WRITTIN I JUS HOPE 2 BE JUS AS GUD AZ U EVEN DOH DAT MITE TAKE SUMTYMES LASTING LONGER DEN MY THOUGHTZ, DANG DATZ GONE BE A WHILE LOL, BLACKLUV AND BP
     
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