Black Poetry : rebel.

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Obscure, Apr 15, 2004.

  1. Obscure

    Obscure Active Member MEMBER

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    Revolutionaries,
    Thats what we need.
    "Vote for me..."
    really equals follow me to hell.
    J.F.K. stood for us. he took the bullet for non-aparthied, and they want us to stand for the flag. "my blackness wont allow me."
    And you can stop me.
    Cuzz i still scream.
    "black power"
    with my right fist up.
    You better be glad i dont have the right to bare arms. But I still have a gun and a bad temper. i got zero tolerance; for y'all. Dr. king is gone... and you aint half the man he was with your ****** broken dreams.
    I wanted peace
    But only kept a piece of mind
    I lost the rest along with sanity
    I studied humanity
    and learned nothing.
    the ocean washed away our castles and left behind the sand.
    So we rebuilt our lives in the middle of poverty.
    We cooked in our kitchens and sold the rocks.
    Everyone gots to eat... so children buy from the local dealer
    while their parents give them money and blindly support their cause.
    A tears falls,
    And is caught by the sky as i walk on the ground.
    Proving to y'all... the world is upside down.

    WuN...
     
  2. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    welcome to detee.com
    nice drop
    hope to read more

    Peace
    Angel
     
  3. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This was a deep drop, well felt and posed. Welcome to destee!! Looking forward to reading more from you.
     
  4. Bluewater

    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    hello and Welcome:wave:
    this is a wonderful first drop
    of real world drama
    Peace
    BlueWater:heart:
     
  5. twision

    twision Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    WELCOME TO DESTEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

    I like the conciousness of this piece!
    Your pen conveys the need for change
    I like the way this one flows
    A hint of anger
    A hint of aggression
    A hint of one dissatisfied with complacency!

    Oh yeah.....do your thang
    I'm listening!


    PEACE AND LOVE
    twision
     
  6. Nita

    Nita Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    yes

    WELCOME!!!!!

    Than you for blessin us with this piece..lQQkin to see more from you :thanks: :peace:
     
  7. the_story

    the_story Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    welcome...we are glad to have u...
    :heart:
    -story
     
  8. the_story

    the_story Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    s...l...o...w d...o...w...n

    (the way he loved me)
    he way he called my name provoked tears to fall
    and thoughts through subconciousness....
    i used to suffer trying to get
    heavens windows to onpen for me...
    dicipating..while listenin to his theory
    on how love was born...

    (realization)
    i used to play on the devils playground...
    untill i found salvation...in the depts of my own hell..
    her name was QueenTswan...she helped me see things new...
    i was reincarnated...

    i realized that one day
    if i didn't slow down that Hot_Sauce i would
    "melt myself" like someone so slyly told me...
    see...i was Mz.Behavin entirely to much
    soo i lost touch with reality..
    spinning on a axis that would have
    my heart broken into fiffetten thousand peices
    or strung out quiverin like a crack addict...

    i was finally complete...

    (hey writers block is still in affect...ima do my thang though...this is off of my experiences...so if some of it may not make sense...but bear with me)
    :heart
    -story
     
  9. Obscure

    Obscure Active Member MEMBER

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    thanks for the replies.
    stay up.

    -one-
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    welcome within tyte write look to read more of u
     
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