Black Poetry : ReBeL On DiS

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Da Street Rebel, Apr 20, 2009.

  1. Da Street Rebel

    Da Street Rebel Banned MEMBER

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    i don't NEED your validation mother******

    you think
    you can "control" me
    with policy
    nizza
    you think
    this is
    monopoly?
    i don't
    need your
    apology
    obvious to me
    you're not
    a part of me

    i can articulate
    and
    reach for the waist
    you know
    i'm street
    in the long run
    just in case
    *****
    **** this cyber****
    we can
    go
    face to face
    it all
    don't
    matter to me
    i got your favorite
    flava kool aid
    in case
    you want
    a taste

    you can bet *****
    take that as a threat *****
    go to my profile
    check my picture
    kill me if you have to
    i won't miss ya
    and i won't have to
    kiss your *** mista

    or mrs
    whatever you prefer
    i concur
    *****
    i'm that drink
    you
    DON'T
    want to stir
    when i say **** you
    that means you
    **** the goldfish
    **** your granny
    yes even her

    you thought
    the south
    was dyrty dyrty
    *****
    we flip birdies
    put to 2
    in your derby
    leave you out
    by the landfill
    in that nasty
    water that's murky

    i deal with DEATH
    nothing less
    too many attempts
    on my life to have regrets

    i have
    nothing left to lose
    but my
    next breath to breathe
    and i must be praying
    if you see me on my knees
    don't think
    there's sugar in this tank
    please ***** please
    it's more like
    step the **** back

    RebeL On DiS

    and say

    CHEESE!

    :picture:

    :nono:

    :donttell:
     
  2. Khasm13

    Khasm13 STAFF STAFF

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    lol....
    this reminded me of a cut i heard the other day....
    i haven't heard it in awhile either....
    "new york is red hot"....lol
    tyte scribe poet...

    one love
    khasm
     
  3. triniti424

    triniti424 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    say what?

    okay...on the "eval" tip - this was one of the most honest pieces yet to grace the board. No apologies. No pretense. No illusion. Just a real bein real and

    on the personal tip - its sooooooo lovely if that makes me creepy LOL then oh well

    Not everything is gonna be rainbows and waterfalls ya dig. It is what it is and it should always be able to be what it wanna be.

    Much Props Poet.

     
  4. cherryblossom

    cherryblossom Banned MEMBER

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    As the deacons say in chuuch, "WAYLE!"

    And they have been warned! lol

    This was, not straight, but SKRAIT in-ya-face, somebody going down and it aint me stuff, right chere!
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Sometimes you need to get knee deep in it, in the hopes that others will at least sense that they are entrenched in it, but some will know it's **** and say it's roses anyway. Tight write scribe.
     
  6. Nasheed

    Nasheed Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Feeling You Foreal

    Hardcore, Real and to the Point. :uzi::uzi::uzi::uzi::uzi::uzi:
    Nuttin but Fire
     
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    info-moetry STAFF STAFF

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    peace to the god....



    I know exactly where you comin' from..........
    - -
    Scrybe on @ !! @
     
  8. LURK

    LURK Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    "so who's asking for a knuckle sangwhich meng...."(in my best Scarface impression)


    ok, ju wanna play rough..lets play rough!

    haha

    dope shhhh
     
  9. triniti424

    triniti424 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    LOL @ Lurks knuckle sangwhich :lol:

    thats what I thought about when Brother posted this piece :lol:
     
  10. asimplepoet

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    Well honey I overstand where you coming from. Every once in a while you have to take it the gutta and street level for folks to really get it. Well you know I got your back no matter what my brother. Tyte scribe.
     
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