Quiet Poetry Lounge : Reason Hit'n Coco's Mental HotSpot

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  1. cocobutterskyn

    cocobutterskyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I detect affection
    through my perspective.
    absorb'n poetical words
    as they romance me with all their
    advances,
    With a spin of a pen
    words blend creat'n
    a whirlwind of beautiful
    lyrics caress'n my mental,
    like fingertips gent-ly press-n
    try'n to find away'n my lips.
    a one man exPEDition to get'n
    my HEART~ does a dance of
    FLIP-flops!
    RA-pId-Ly beat'n
    Cause you hit my mental hotSPOT!.

    MadLove:love: 2 U
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    WOW!!!

    IT FEELS GOOD TO BE HIT LIKE DAT!!
    DON'T IT??

    SOMEBODY IN POETICAL LOVE
    :heart: :love: :heart:
     
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    cocobutterskyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Yep!

    That's the REASON I have a passion for poetry. It ROCKS my MENTAL in soooo many ways.

    $$RICH$$, Thanks for the love your continue to show.

    MadLove:heart: Coco
     
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    UbZoRbShUn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ummmmm

    I'm sure Reason will love this. he probably speecless right now. I likes
     
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    Amun-Ra Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hit It!

    A nice blend--Amun-Ra

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  6. cocobutterskyn

    cocobutterskyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Zorb, I hope Reas enjoys it, as I enjoy his words. Thanks for the love.

    Amun=Ra, I'll glad you got into my blend. Thanks

    MadLove:heart: Coco
     
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    Thank you for
    allowing me
    to
    lick your memory
    and set the mood
    for you to be inspired
    by the love that I scribe

    I must admit
    you've moved me
    im speechless
    and left unable to
    verbalize
    a forehead kiss

    know that your
    affection has effected me
    and
    if given the chance to
    once again enter ya mental
    hot spot
    I promise not only to hit it
    but to dig it out!
    Affectionately...

    Thank you!
    From the heart
    Reas
     
  8. cocobutterskyn

    cocobutterskyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Reas

    Your words so sweet
    a special candy treat
    for my mind to eat.

    No need to verbalize
    for it's loud and clear
    in your scribe.

    The virual high
    your licks provide.
    I'm hypnotized from
    your steady ride.

    Now, I'm not gonna lie
    you've caught my eye.
    Intrigued my mental
    to see all your potential.

    You have my permission
    to gain admission to
    hit
    stroke
    caress
    and dig out!
    Affectionately
    my mental hotspot into
    submission.
     
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