Black Poetry : realizelife

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  1. realeyezrealize

    realeyezrealize Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    The night falls with sun set
    I slumber too! into sweet rest
    the brid's call before I get out of bed
    the day is risen instead
    No I don't want to let go,but he bids me
    another day is approaching as I open
    these refreshed eyes
    I realize life
    I try to make up my mind, drawn ,yet wanna be tired

    (Some of us deny ourselves help, causing eternal expiry to the personal experience of living, somewhere cries a desire for giving, needing to be complete..., missing what has ignorantly been interpreted as obsolete)

    waking up empty when he sent me to seek

    (many are operating under everyday probations because they've become numb to the principles he gave us, still we take off on the go, flesh full of inquity)

    So indeed I take hold of the moment that is,......
    ....as I continue to live he's given it to me
    I acknowledge his glory ever that is before me or even these foundations
    In submission I release every trase of anxiety laden with sin by hiding in his omnipotence
    and my journey begins prepared for all things
    There is life In Jesus Christ
    realeyezrealize-lies consumed in his shining pure LIGHT!!
     
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    HODEE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Welcome to Destee Realeyez

    I really enjoyed reading this. I can see your faith in GOD is strong. I can see you are helpful to others. I can see you take on your armor each day and go thru life as our father would like you to do.

    " (Some of us deny ourselves help expiring the personal experience of living) Somewhere lies a desire for giving, needing to be complete "

    You’re on point with the fact many cloak their pain in some shroud and stumble day in and out thru life never really living. Carrying a silent pride that robs support and understanding. Yet many if it be known would turn that pain or sorrow into ridicule, not understanding that they are judging another. So many keep the secret. Never touching and growing. As we travel thru life, there are those we meet that have a purpose to get us to the next hour, next day and into another year. Each one of us have that purpose yet so many do not understand and just keep that nagging question in the back of their mind.

    Why am I here? :read: the bible

    A kind word. A meal. A helping hand. If you know I hurt my back. Be my neighbor and ask me if you could help me keep my garden. You never know that garden may have to feed you one day. Offer me a ride if you know we go the same way. Because you never know when you may need a ride.

    I have seen folks surprised when help is offered. First response is to turn it down. It is a response because they have no other. They may not need the assistance. Then thank the person and do it graciously. If the help is needed, don't get angry because no one must know. Accept the help if it is offered with all due respect.

    If your caught down on my luck. Knocked down in life.
    It's a unwritten rule but you may be kicked, or stepped on.

    This causes many to keep silent and suffer.

    Pride is false. Fear of ridicule is foolish.

    If you look all is revealed. If you listen all is spoken and told.

    I have seen those who have judged suffer, for the sin. GOD doesn't always wait until you reach heaven to bring you humble. I have seen those who laughed at my family when we were not doing good. We needed help, and those same folks saw their judgement on this earth. My mother taught us to take no joy in anothers suffering. My mother is doing great today. Her children retired her. She hasn't worked in forty years. Bless the truth.
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Living in the word allowing self to truly see, this scribe speaks much truth. Welcome to Destee. Hope to read more from you.
     
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    caramelpython Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    welcome

    Welcome to the family and yes I loved this because it was real!!!
    Flow on poet, you have a voice and it's being heard!
     
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    welcome poet...
    nice joint...please drop more on us...
    one love
    khasm
     
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    Joyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Reading your poem was a blessing to me. More than ever "I realize" that life grows to be beautiful when planted in Christ. Thanks for sharing. :spin:
     
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    wow like a true blessing happy u here to share this
    again welcome to the family awsome write
     
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    hello and welcome
    this was a tight scribe..
    loving the flow..
    come join us in chat too!!!
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    Peace
    Angel

    keep on flowing
     
  9. realeyezrealize

    realeyezrealize Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thankx

    Honestly and modestly
    I must just say thanks
    All I am or ever will be is in MY GOD My king
    From Him all blessings flow
    I am touched by the words of love
    Thanks very much.
     
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    ~Those words are very true and powerful. I loved this very descriptive poem. Indeed their is life in Jesus Christ, and without Him its pure death. Much love and many blessing. Peace. :rolling: