Black Poetry : Realization...

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  1. SOULSTAR

    SOULSTAR Active Member MEMBER

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    I’ve just realized so I have to verbalize the pain and betrayal I’ve felt inside.Tell me why? Why did you have to lie, didn’t you know that’s what made me cry.Deep down inside I thought you had my back, just to REALIZE that was a load of crap!Nothing can justify how you broke me down, that’s why till today I still frown!

    A new day is here I raise above all my fears.A new me you can see what I see, My tears of pain have turned to joy on REALIZATION that you were just a boy!You cant handle me a NUBIAN PRINCESS... Yea that’s me!!

    I now know you aren’t worthy to be in my life, all that time wasted thinking ill be your wife!You can’t handle what I have to offer, all you wanted was for me to cook you super! well now you can ask that SLAPPER!! As for me i`ll just sit here and watch you suffer!

    Never Ever will I go through this **** again, but I have to thank you for helping me become this "higher being", Spiritually and mentally have grown now I can rightfully sit on my THROWN!

    Back in the day we had a home, love, trust, respect a future and responsibility but you threw that all away with your infidelity!

    As you sit at home and ponder on your thoughts, thinking I’m all sad and distraught, well here’s a little something for you to digest!...... you have had and loved the best now you shall surely regret, You shall NEVER EVER!!!! Love a BLACK PRINCESS!!
     
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    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    much love and power to you
    dear sister
    you release a deep flow of telling
    the world with feeling
    who you are
    flow on
    Peace~N~Love
    BlueWater:heart:
     
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    Very beautiful poem sis. it put the cards on the table, I like how you started it and like where you took it.
     
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    This was powerful! I felt this piece....
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    heart felt scribe here feeling u all the way
     
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    Thanks Guys.....
    I appreciate your comments..... you make me keep the pen poised!....

    ONE.....xxxxxx :luv:
     
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    You are truly blessed! My God this is beautiful!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
     
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    There is power in the realization that a princess deserves more...I hear ya.
     
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