Black Poetry : REALITY

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by L.P, May 23, 2004.

  1. L.P

    L.P Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Surrounded by waves of a destructive force.
    Hate surfaces with no remorse.
    Creating minds of no self-worth.
    Lives are taken,hearts feeling no hurt.
    Constructive wisdom absent from the mind.
    Leaving compassion somewhere in time.
    Questions buried in undeveloped minds.
    Negative vibes waging war stalling for time.
    Love struggling,hate a thin line,clouds of deception,truth hard to find.
    Self-knowledge motivated can't be denied.
    (Free will)given open your eyes.
    Feelings locked down and standing trial.
    Evil in the background with a wicked smile.
    Growing and out of control.
    A world exploding with lost souls.
    The key within you.
    That's the real truth.
    Reach deep within yourself.
    True thoughts will give you help.
    Materialistic things will come and go,and get in the mind way.
    Finding who you are, is the only game to play.
    Wake up all my sisters and brothers.
    This world of ours is in serious trouble.
    Everywhere you turn.
    Someone getting burn.
    Mothers in the work force out of the home.
    Children pushed in the background all alone.
    Gangs the parents down the streets.
    Sitting comfortable in the drivers seat.
    Cooperation,legislation,pushing us against the wall.
    Violence on the uprise,love on the downfall.
    Creating diversion the weapon of choice.
    A smooth way of silence your voice.
    Promoting war ignoring peace.
    Society the blame for releasing the beast.
    The color of your skin now in play.
    But awareness is changing that everyday.
    Greed high stepping we just can't get enough.
    Break down in the system.
    Living life in handcuffs.
    The soul, purpose of life is to enjoy.
    But we're in a state of mind,everything we touch we destroy.
    We've lost the meaning of respect.
    And only our cruelty reflect,with all sorts of interference in our minds.
    Somewhere in the process,we've put ourselves in a predicament of teacherous times.
    The time is now,something has to be done.
    If you truly care about your daughters and sons.
    It's easy,the solution is within you.
    Ask yourself the question,I know it's something I can do.
    Now is the time to believe in your faith.
    For our Father is surely awake.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    true indeed faith & hope will carry u a long way
    speak on dis was a powerful scribe for the mindz
    and the wrongdoers !!
    happy u here sharing great wisdom & knowledge upon the family poeticlly
     
  3. angelicsage

    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    and this summed it all up...
    this was a tyte scribe...
    a reflection of our
    current society...

    well expressed
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Just a Ball of Confusion, and it's a good thing that our father is so aware. Much truth in this piece, and well written. Keep these flows coming, I'll surely be reading.
     
  5. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    very well posed
    likes...
    flow on
    peace
    Angel
     
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