Black Poetry : Reality With Dream World

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  1. EbonyQueen06

    EbonyQueen06 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    My body cries
    I sleep
    My dreams tickle my senses!
    As I fight fantisy with reality
    Dreaming of u beside my pillow
    Passionate kisses all over my body
    that are so imaginary,
    bet yet feel so real!
    No words needed to be said,
    Love making was the next dimension.
    U between the places u signed n sealed,
    Ohh so many times!
    Another autograph by u
    It feels so good u in my bed
    I can feel u
    Every motion,
    Every breathless gasp
    The sweat running down your body
    Not realizing it's mine!
    My pillow right beside me,
    As I wake into reality,
    That u r no longer heare
    Emotionally
    Physically
    Or in spirit
    ur Gone
    The love I had was a dellusion
    I cry 4 u as I wake
    Felling sadden
    because my virginity what I gave u
    And forever longing is what u have left me:hiya: :shades: :sick:
     
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    Tantrum Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Your dreams are my caravan
    My love is here
    Wipe your eyes-Love in hands
    The dream you see is the reality I bring
    The words you speak is the love in me
    This time its realier than I know
    Right there is no other way to go
    My heart pumps for that loving feeling
    That Ebony sweet Ebony healing
    The motion I give is like nothing felt
    The emotions runs down
    Makes the heart just melt
    The senses I tingle is so heart felt
    I need you
    I need you
    Oh baby I need you so much
    Make this dream reality
    Before our hears break
    Baby dont crush

    Much Love Poet
     
  3. EbonyQueen06

    EbonyQueen06 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :bowdown: :bowdown: :bowdown: :bowdown: :bowdown: :bowdown: :bowdown: Thank u I really appreciate that
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    feeling the reality
    off the dream that
    is captured within
    only the taste lingers
    upon the stain pillow
    from the tears
    allow me to mend da
    broken and caress
    thy heart of reality
    from the maze that yearn

    some how i know this all so well.
     
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    I can certainly relate to this feeling that you described so well. Well written flow.
     
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    nevar Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ahhh real love flow on poet.
     
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    Hi EbonyQueen
    Oh yes
    Those fantasty do
    have away of drifting into
    our realties, no whispering wprds
    just that sense of being
    Very tyte poem :)
    Keep the ink dripping

    Peace
     
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    Tha-Emissary Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Ummm. I'm taken away by the skills. Some them lines just left my head spinning like where you talk about the sweat. Whew I think I'm a bow down when you come to my town. Very Outstanding Art!
     
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    EbonyQueen06 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    THanks for the love u know I love u all:blowkiss: :blowkiss: :blowkiss: :blowkiss: :blowkiss: :blowkiss:
     
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    Very Nice EbonyQueen06

    I believe he must have had you on his mind too. If the moon is a friend of yours send her to put something on his mind.
     
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