Black Poetry : Reality to reality of a dream

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  1. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Right back to reality out of a dream
    Dayum!!! feel like screaming
    Just letting go…..
    Not to far from the short bus
    Loosing my mind
    Crying when I can’t breath
    Burning deep inside
    As the pain cuts deep
    And now I don’t know what to do
    Don’t know how I lasted this long…
    Up and down like a roller coaster
    Got me wrap in you like a fool going crazy
    A few steps from the Looney tune…
    Today can’t bare the pain
    And so ashamed
    Just another lonely day
    Betrayal of a trust
    Finding self in the dark
    Made that extra mark
    Turning curves and feelin like hell
    Twisted in the mental cant seem to pass
    Right for turning left
    Ran over like a monkey with strings…
    As the clouds begin to cover
    The story begins to unfold
    dayum!!! how can u be so bold….
    Tracing my soul and lifting hopes
    Undying love….of a promise
    Gone wrong…
    It was a race to see who can kill who
    Guess you won..
    Sank straight to hell
    I fell its my own fault
    as I let my heart guide me to a fate…
    That I knew was meant for my plate..
    But I can never hate you…
    The love
    The caring
    The passion
    Words and the meanings
    Went deeper then you could ever know
    Reality to reality of a dream

    (C) 2004
    JBG Production
     
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    Monetary going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    MzBlkAngel...

    :grouphug:.....:crying:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    dreams & reality seem to clash
    and never know what may pass
    but from the walls of reasons
    always a new shinning season
    awaken from the bliss & love
    to reality of another day
    but faith and truth will comfort
    and caress and allow one to
    feel da rest as the curtain come
    down to the act of a dream
    but reality has know to come in
    suprises beware of tomorrow
    so deeply felt sistah and i know the rain will end soon to sunshine
    warmth and lots of hugs what seem forever alone is myth to reality
    express on Angel i hear ya emotions speaking.
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Money QQ..u getting ummm sensitivededed on me....no cry
    a new day is coming :wink: thanks for the hug...

    Rich... thank you for your flow
    faith and truth will comfort
    in time it all well be so clear...
    thank you for your words of wisdom.... :love:


    I love yall both thank you
    Angel
     
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    SwtT Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    wooo....tight verse packed with some serious pain....
     
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    gempis Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Whoa, girl, this is gut wrenching. Hang in there - it is always darkest before the dawn. Don't forget how strong you are. Much love......
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thank you both for your loving support
    Peace
    Angel
     
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    jazzymoonchild Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    MBA,

    Keep your head up. This too shall pass. Take care of you.
     
  9. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    jazzy always i love me
    thanks for the love sis
    Peace
    Angel
     
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    7thPoet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    there's an ancient African proverb which says:

    "the best things in the hands of a fool
    will turn to the fools destruction
    yet out of the worst the wise
    will find means of good

    Be wise...

    Like Jazzy said-this too must pass

    we gotcha back :grouphug:
     
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