Black Poetry : Reality of love

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Realguyjeff, Jul 17, 2003.

  1. Realguyjeff

    Realguyjeff Active Member MEMBER

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    I greeted love as it composed cells of our symphony with augmented walks and stares.

    We became polyphonic music reverberated and appreciated by even its creator.

    Until long dances became circumstances, and thus is the pattern of real romances,

    When loves shoulders lose strength to support the weight of a life without dates.

    And the safe speed of slow dances accelerate,

    We only dance optimistically-

    yet see it tried and true.

    Real love tries hard, but sometimes it looses too.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    yes love has a mystery side
    of a one love and a myth of love
    forth some win & some loose
    it's all in what the two choose
    tyte scribe
     
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    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I am loving your style..............will be looking for more of you!

    Peace,
    angeli
     
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    ASHANTA Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This is a sweet flow to the loving heart I really like this.
     
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