Black Poetry : Reality Check~#2 (Haiku)

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  1. cocobutterskyn

    cocobutterskyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Reality check
    Alcohol don't drown problems
    trust, they'll resurface

    Madd Holiday Greetings :heart:
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  2. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Amen sistah!

    i've been saying it all along yet one don't see it
    but soon will feel it .....big tyme....
     
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    speaking as a witness to this troof, coco. i tried to douse my monday situations into a couple + glasses of champagne...only to awaken tuesday with a slight headache and monday's situations were now tuesday's.

    nicely told

    Zhay
     
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    just

    tell the truth, anyhow!

    thank ya!

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  5. cocobutterskyn

    cocobutterskyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    $RICH$~ It was you who inspired this Haiku. I read yours and this flo'd from me. I pray that whomever it maybe receives deliverance from what causes them to drink.
    Tho I've never experienced what it's like to be drunk nor to have a drinking problem, I've seen people who have and I can't imagine it is the way they would like their lives to be.

    Zhay~ I feel you. alcolhol is but one way we believe we've gotten rid of our problems.....many just think ignoring them will make them go away.....you say the truth....Mondays problems not dealt with will be there on Tuesday to greet us. Thanks for your words.

    Alyce~Thanks for the sistahly love

    Madd Holiday Greetings :heart:
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    Kitana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Coco..so true

    and the next morning not only is the problem still there but you also have a hangover to deal with....

    problems don't go away until you deal with them..

    K
     
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    j'hiah Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    true dat.
     
  8. cocobutterskyn

    cocobutterskyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Kitana~ Ain't that the truth. Thanks for the love

    J'hiah~ Nice to see you about. Thanks for the hit

    Madd Holiday Greetings :heart:
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  9. Da Street So'ja

    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    DLSS

    since you started writing haikus
    the haikus have been written by a genius

    DSSNY
     
  10. cocobutterskyn

    cocobutterskyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    So'ja,

    If you are tryin to get me to show my pearly whites.......it worked :laugh: On a serious note.....I feel it is an over statement, but it was very sweet of you to say. I sincerely thank you. :wink:

    Madd Respect from
    YLSS :heart:
     
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