Black Poetry : Realative Reality

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  1. thatgirl74

    thatgirl74 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    As the summer rain
    lulls me to sleep
    I since your presence.
    You come to me on the
    warm damp breeze.
    You kiss me in all the
    sweetest places.
    And you fill me
    with such passion.
    I ride the wave of our
    love making it
    seems for an ever.
    You never speak
    and there is no need.
    You know exactly what
    I need.
    Your body fulfills me
    and caries me to
    planets not yet discovered.
    In this wonderful place
    you and I stay intertwined
    and interlocked in our loving.
    The rain washes over us and
    cools our hot bodies and
    allows us to go on and on.
    It seems an eternity
    before the sun rises and the
    rain end.
    And as I yawn and stretch I
    realize that the dream
    is all over.
    I look across my bed and
    the naked body untop of my
    crumpled sheets make me realize
    you weren't really a figment
    of my imagination but a part of my reality.
    But then I guess reality is all realative.
     
  2. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    what u pose is awesome and real
    da emotions da depth the lovin bliss
    yeap it's me ......lol
    very well done poetess
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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  4. thatgirl74

    thatgirl74 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hey thanks Watz. I am trying to let it flow.
    $$Rich$$ you are too much!!! :spinstar:
     
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    twision Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Oh yeah
    The serenity found in the morning after!
    This poem was tight!
    I like how descriptive and detailed this was
    Good poetry
    Very good poetry!!!!!

    Peace and love
    TWISION
     
  6. thatgirl74

    thatgirl74 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank You so much for the love and support.
     
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    Antar Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    yuh
    :sand:
    sweetly said

    one love,
    /antar
     
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