Quiet Poetry Lounge : Real

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Desert Storm, Jun 4, 2002.

  1. Desert Storm

    Desert Storm Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I have a friend
    Who's hope seems real

    I have a friend
    Who I know
    Probably can't chill

    I have a friend
    Who doesn't know
    My feelings for him

    And he's so real
    I wish I didn't have to pretend

    Desert Storm
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    this was a sweet little piece i love the realism of it
     
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    Thank you Rich ... This is heavy.
    D.S.
     
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    yes it is .....

    Let it be known to him what u feel
    tell him the reality deal
    no need to pretend any more
    let him know from da depth of ya core
    sista speak up tell him what u feel

    I know what u mean too .
     
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