Black Poetry : ???REAL???

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  1. DymePlaya2g

    DymePlaya2g Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    you ever wish that maybe you didn't
    know as much as you do
    because you know too much and
    knowing brings understanding
    which in turn bares confusion

    does this make sense or should i stop?

    you witness injustice, hate, and crime
    and claim that you just want
    everything to be kept REAL
    but then that turns out to be
    just TOO **** REAL!

    does this make any sense?

    you feel things that others feel
    shouldn't be felt but you
    can't deny feelings
    although you wish it were possible
    and conscious efforts are made

    really, should i stop?

    yeah let me stop...
     
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    shaneak Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Stop?

    Please...don't let it go...
    keep up the flow.
    You see...
    you speak nothing but the truth...
    and i'm sure it is not only seen in the eyes of me and you

    So continue with your thoughts...
    and express how you feel...
    cause if you don't...
    then you'll be considered unreal...

    I'm hear and i'm listening...
    Keep scribing!!!
     
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    DymePlaya2g Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    unreal? uh oh...not the title i was going for
    it just seems that each day
    brings new insight but takes
    some innocense with it
    sometimes i just wanna close my eyes
    cover my ears and pretend i don't know
    i just wanna make things right
    fix the broken
    help the helpless
    uplift down souls
    but it's beyond my control
    i spend time in prayer
    and give it all to my, your and OUR father!!!

    LOVE&RESPECT!!!
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    I

    FEEL YA ON DES ONE HERE
    I KNOW AND WISH IF I DIDN'T KNOW NOR SEE
    YET NOT HEAR BUT I DO AND IF I COULD I WOULD
    MY MIND IS IN A TRANCE MY SOUL CRY OUT
    AND MY HEART BLEEDS IN SORROW ...I'LL DO MY
    PART TO HELP AS MANY AS I CAN....THANK U
     
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    shaneak Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I know where you're coming from!!!

    And that's why we take it day by day..
    continue to pray...and everthing will be okay

    Just do the things you feel are right...
    We hide behind our lives a refuse to open doors for others..
    me..I won't lie..I open them and close them at the same time...

    Its like some one scuffling for change...here ya go sir..
    and walk way...Sorry..I'm not looking for conversation..okay.

    Those kinds of things...and yes..its the same old song..that we all sing...I wish I could...and if I would..but just as long as you are doing what you can do...Believe the lords is thankful...

    Now Dyme, I'm not saying or labeling you as unreal but never be ashamed or hide how you feel. Express for all the world to know...That way you don't have to worry about too many people thats actually listening to still step on your toes. Its all gravy baby LOL :)

    Besides...i see you and you see me...we can become three....in our mentallity. We can do great things..maybe not solve world hunger but one plus two...can show nuff help somebody get food. Keep scribin baby!!! We can't solve it but we sure can help it.
     
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    DymePlaya2g Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    SHANEAK~ well ma looks like for once u have me at a loss for words :) i heard and felt all dat!!! :)

    LOVE&RESPECT
     
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    DymePlaya2g Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    $$RICH$$ i used to think that me alone couldn't make a diff but when others share ur desires, it makes it all the more possible.

    LOVE&RESPECT
     
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    Uh Oh! Uh Oh! Uh Oh!

    You stirring up something awful in here. Yeah the TRUTH,hurts sometimes in more ways than one. You REAL. Keep on keeping it real bro. Feeling you.
    Warning: THIS MAY BE TOO DEEP FOR SOME,TO ENJOY!
    Desert Storm
    (I'm watchin you)
     
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    DymePlaya2g Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Desert Storm~~ sometimes i wonder if my words are too REAL...but share them anyhow because i can't...hell...WON'T deny them!!! thanks for feelin' me, ur felt as well.

    LOVE&RESPECT
     
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