Black Poetry : real women

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by thespokesman, Dec 15, 2003.

  1. thespokesman

    thespokesman Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    A real woman


    Tainted Plat……

    Unfinished sentences when appearance is seen
    Foreshadowed by stress that hides in seams
    Of cosmetics and saturated glamour
    Abandoned by the man that damned her

    Kid by the side, trying to keep face
    Some see beauty, I see a vanquished face
    All dimed up dime piece worth three pennies
    Many men approach but if u ain’t holdin any…..

    A real woman, a fictional character
    The truth is most women are actors
    Depicted in my own imagination
    But I may be wrong…..

    Back to the story, I see earrings dangled
    Diamonds fluctuate with the late, untangled
    By bystanders as they glance
    She increases her prance, swaying forth trying to keep stance

    Cuz composures everything when you approach her
    A lot of men were foolish in trying to encroach her
    She seen many brothas just like you and me
    Who stands out between the next man and me?

    A real women, stands strong
    Holds her own, dependant for love
    Heart like a dove, hold hand like a glove
    Supportive in endeavors, and sings your favorite song

    What a wish, what a dream, I could detour and ride her curves
    If she would ride with me, when I start to drive recklessly and swerve
    I know she would, that’s why I stay even though problems exist
    Love is never bliss, only seizures of moments like this

    Broke and depressed, she still smiles in agony and defeat
    For if there’s a breath she’s still on her feet
    Climbing mountains, racing against time
    The time that same man will stand next to her in line

    A real woman ain’t seem it yet
     
  2. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    now i'm lovin this flava here u really came wit it
    tyte flow
     
  3. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    tight drop
    indeed...flow on
     
  4. BaduX

    BaduX Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    LUVD THIS POEM TO THE FULLEST OF LUV...
    I like when you said
    "all dimed up dime piece worth 3 pennies"
    that was funny...
    liked this one 4real
    GOD BLESS :coffee:
     
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    you know this flow is tight
    when you see that woman
    it will be when you are not looking for her :)
    Natural
    Peace
     
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