Quiet Poetry Lounge : Real Woman

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by poeticnite, Sep 17, 2003.

  1. poeticnite

    poeticnite New Member MEMBER

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    Baby, sexy, sweetie, *****, those words are not my name,
    Stop approaching me with bull**** lines, and your stupid *** game
    there may be some that fall for that and do whatever you say,
    but unless you can approach me like a real man, don’t even come my way
    because I am a real woman

    it’s really not about how big it is, or how long you can make it last,
    if whenever I need you for more than that, I can’t even find your ***
    you’ve gotten to the point where you think making me cum is all you need to do,
    if that was all I wanted, truth be told, I wouldn’t even need you
    because I am a real woman

    the most beautiful thing God has ever created, sits right before your eyes,
    The deadliest weapon known to man, lies right between my thighs
    please don’t test me, I know how to use it, I make grown men cry,
    I can make the judge turn to a life of crime, and the preacher want to lie
    because I am a real woman

    Learn to love me, fulfill my dreams, and take care of all my needs,
    Be there for me when I need you most and your desires I will please
    learn respect, honesty, and trust, and then use them when dealing with me,
    Be dedicated to keeping me happy, and your queen I will be,
    because I am a real woman

    I know all men are not the same, but the bad ones have made it hard,
    So when you approach me, don’t be surprised, if I suddenly put up my guard
    I have to protect myself from being hurt, that I know you’ll understand,
    Just take your time and love me right, and I may let you be my man,
    because I am a real woman

    I hope my words will let you know exactly how I feel,
    Here’s your chance to let me know, if a man can still be real
    and to my sisters still struggling to become, the woman they want to be,
    Never give up on your hopes and dreams, and stay true to what you believe,
    because you can be a real woman
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    welcome welcome welcome !!!!

    welcome poeticnite...
    welcome to destee.com quiet flowz
    welcome from above as i bless u dis love
    happy u join us in the bonding , loving , caring way
    this was on hit as u let da world know continue
    to flow as i welcome u within da family:)
    do look around we have so much here our very own sistah
    chat and live open mic for poetry at www.destee.com/chat
    come join us any night u like we 24/7 :D
    :wave: :wave: :wave: :wave: :wave: :wave: :wave:
     
  3. cojamalik

    cojamalik Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I don't know where you went but if you are still at Destee write something else. I enjoyed this a lot!!!!!!!
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    yes indeed this was awesome scribing
    love to feel more of this poet's pen
     
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    phenomenalwoman Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    wow...incredible
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Yes, that was on point, maybe this poet will return with more.
     
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    gosh you are deep:)
    loving how you embrace
    in the flow
    very nice indeed
    and Welcome:wave:
    please do share
    more of your flow
    Peace
    BlueWater:heart:
     
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