Black Poetry : REAL STUFF

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by rhymebad, Feb 22, 2008.

  1. rhymebad

    rhymebad Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    REAL STUFF

    Don’t believe in fake parades and make raids on MC’S
    For verbal content, “yo dawg those are my rhymes paid fees
    Are appreciated my rhyme strong like limestone so polish your
    Skills and abolish the ill biting nothing exciting or hardcore
    About that my vocab startle like a slab of marble build structures
    And thrill cultures of Hip Hop, rap founded printed on sculptures
    Shaped by man can’t escape the plan of take over we’re great soldiers
    On microphones” power and grace is beautiful like a flower vase bolder
    Than superman this art sprint like Clark Kent at the Daily planet
    Flow this lame and kiss Lois Lane in bed take off my red cape romantic”
    This funk has a divine liking pump rhymes through piping make cats panic
    Never hinder it’s clever and tender like Jessica Simpson some is Hispanics
    This rap affair is lame and flys like airplanes prepare to take off yall
    My landing gear and runways and gunplays never fake or soft at all
    If my brain fail this pertain to mail need to order a new set want
    True and best so I called UPS and set up for a quick deliver don’t
    Like being faced with a thick river of stupidity, eats a cucumber
    Proceed along a path and need strong math to count the number
    Of hummers this summer roads crowded, engage in sex then slumber
    In the streets the slum looks like some books with pages stuck together
    When buck shots fired duck or whatever but never try be clever
    Enough to try take a bullet
     
  2. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    And that is some real stuff right there rhymebad.
     
  3. Desert Storm

    Desert Storm Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    in da screetz
    live life, leavin ya naked
    fresh meat
    to be devoured
    fustrated
    the human depravity
    heart achin
    love need to be painted
    painted tha color of love
    on murals commemerated
    love painted
    through tha lessons learned well
    and
    will still be demonstrated

    nough to spread
    still spread to thin
    nough to go round
    still many dying
    hustlin and street pimpin

    not enough
    to make us soar high
    daily we get our rations
    still somehow the soul survives
    it's all the way live
    this ain't no junk
    this ain't no jive

    feeling ya mad skills!
    Thanks for tha read

    Desert Storm
     
  4. Bluewater

    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hi rhymebad
    very nice scribe
    and DS wonderful feed back
    Awesome

    Peace~N~Love
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    word up bruh do it up
     
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