Black Poetry : Real Love

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  1. 1poetsought

    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    REAL LOVE :heart:
    ~~~~~~~~~
    Are you absolutely certain
    Supernatually exact ~
    Been waitng for perfection
    Wonder where its at

    In a place at a crossroads
    Affraid of life's next dare
    Want admission to the only state
    That death and taxes fear

    Have those grand expectations
    Fallen short on hard times
    Does a casual relationship ~
    Fail to satisfy

    Won't you come to the table
    In the name of saving grace
    Get a taste of what is missing
    Have some Jesus on your plate

    Serving others, (loves' appeal)
    Real estate with streets of gold
    Live forever and a day
    Needing love... join the fold


    1poetsought copyright 2003
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    sweet flow dis has da love of gold
     
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    Such a beautiful topic real love must be taught and I must say you have defined it with much wisdom.
     
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    IN GOOD FAITH

    Thank you, faithful friends- 1poetsought
     
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    The only love I really need is the love of God, but sometimes I can get so caught up in a love affair that I began looking for love from man...I loved your poem.

    I write poetry too...Sister Love is a poem you might like. You can look for it in Get Your Flow On. thanx.
     
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    Great peace!

    I enjoy your work.
    Thanks for sharing.

    souldeep!
    Coco
    :heart:
     
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    Poetic Pride

    Thanks for sharing and reading my work. As the name Poetic Pride illustrates I am proud of any effort of mine that touches any one individual. Whenever God is given the glory, then that becomes the ultimate satisfaction any poet can experience.

    yours truly, 1poetsought
     
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    Beauty is only cocobutterskyn deep... I'm affected by your beauty- thanks. 1poetsought
     
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