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  1. serenti-poet

    serenti-poet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    As she drags on
    Being lonely,
    Tired,
    And sad
    She thinks of her
    Troubles,
    Boys, friends, parents.
    She has none
    Her only trouble
    Is making it through
    The next day.
     
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    At times you feel alone,here are some hugs i am passing her way, make it through the day {{{{{{{{PEACE}}}}}}}}
     
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    serenti-poet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks that means alot I'll pass on tha hugs peace utnil then
     
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    and comes the sunshine
    filled with smiles once
    she see that she's alive
    living and know she's blessed

    and today i send her that hug
    and warm smile of comfort.....

    very nicely written poetess....
     
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    serenti-poet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    and she smiles back
    because the hugs
    will never stop coming
    and her smile will
    never stop ending
    because at least
    she can say she is
    still living

    thanks RICH glad you liked it
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    and the memories of love
    reside in her heart
    the true friendship
    is where it start
    she smile wit joy
    her pain is comforted
    knowin in far region
    i am her friend
    i smile as she glow
    this make me know

    I LOVED IT !!!!
    mo' mo' mo' ..............
     
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    serenti-poet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    memories of childhood
    resurfaces tears
    so instead of childhood
    she thinks of the later years
    when life was careless
    and tears were never seen
    when days AND nights
    were beautifully serene
    she thinks of her friend
    the one she's glad she has
    and she knows all the pain
    she holds soon shall past

    :) thanks again RICH your such a wonderful inspiration
     
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    Rich and Serenti - Hot posts, Serenti I really felt the last one.

    when days AND nights - i like that.
     
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