Black Poetry : Real Life

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by daya, Mar 14, 2003.

  1. daya

    daya Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This is my flow.

    I have been strugling my hole life to become a good man's wife.
    only 26 I feel as if my heart is full of bricks, I don't understand what do I do to have just one who is tru.
    My friends find 2 or 3 and not to make them their destiny.
    Can someone show me how, I'm a pretty person inside and out.
    All I think about is this man that will run his hands up my thigh, and for me to see, see how fly he is to me. That look that feel he gives to me. That quiver he gives to me. Why aren't you here to see me.Why aren't you her to give me what I need, Why can't I have you'r last name, for me asking, should I be ashamed,or is that what you wan't, a one night stand. I can't unerstand how a man could be with a women just once and never go back again. does he not understand, what if you let that women pass you by you might not catch another ones eye's. but hay that's you I can't tell you what to do. One day I will find that man for me tell then I'll just set and cry...


    love Daya
     
  2. j'hiah

    j'hiah Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    and after your tears dry, that's when he shall come...

    nice.
    jh.
     
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    j'hiah Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    check your pm
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    weep not nor a tear
    ya true King surely near
    his warmth of love
    is in touch sweetie take ya time
    don't have to rush !
    u will know by his glow
    and then a love will grow
    hold ya head up !
     
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    Legacy21 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Don't cry. The beauty of love and life shines from within your soul. I can relate to the pain in this piece, but you have to unquestioning faith and hope in love. True love is worth the wait, and it will come to you if you love yourself first! Feeling the flow, but encouraging you to keep a happy heart. Peace.
     
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