Black Poetry : REAL FRIENDSHIP

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Securenote, Feb 13, 2005.

  1. Securenote

    Securenote Member MEMBER

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    A musical tune hypnotize the mind.
    A daily race to sit and read.
    Voluntarily surrendering to an unknown.
    Strong/Firm musical notes.
    Notes that carry a Whimsical balance
    jumping off a screen.

    So, soooo! intense are these notes played.
    Does one dare turn his or her head?
    For in each string of letters a connection in a meaning unfolds
    Looping and wrapping a captive mind and soul.
    NOTES STRINGING LETTERS OF: F R I E N D

    Each musical note lingers and gives life on the screen.
    Playing just one special tune as it appeals to the reader.
    Playing over and over,
    while the eyes lock in darkness to a brightly lit screen.
    Watching the letters dance across the mind forming the words of:
    F R I E N D

    Subsequently another note is heard over a keyboard, and landing letters upon the screen.
    Two notes blend so well together.
    Their mixing makes up an exciting
    and enchanting musical combination.
    Lyrics of the word Friendship is heard as they gleefully play like children together.

    Unlocking past,
    sharing notes,
    and comparing notes.
    Making the music flow with a beautiful pureness.
    Freely hitting all the keys on the board without inhibition.
    Real friendship can be felt in this flow.

    Newness and variety creates a light that warms the heart.
    The flirtation of two key boards filled with life.
    Music is in the air and flying on a screen.
    No past Bass, Brass or tenors sounds can stand in the way of this new sound which wraps itself via keyboard to the mind

    Unaware of time gone by, Two New Friends
    continue their play off their keyboard.
    Pressing down letters, forming words and
    sharing private pieces of each other's life
    behind a screen.

    Without warning or notification the musical tune stops.
    One friend abruptly disappears;
    leaving a magical experience lingering in the air.
    Remainder of a soft and peaceful musical note is left playing upon the screen;
    playing the tune of friendship.

    Sitting straight in the chair,
    a smile reveals itself upon someones lip.
    Thoughts circle round and round.
    Eyes remain focus on the note left in IM;
    granting a mind the capability to visualize TRUTH and REAL
    FRIENDSHIP



    © Copyrighted February, 2005 VR
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    this was outstanding beautiful and well versed
    friendship key notes play together hand & hand
    can't get no sweeter ......................................
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Makes me think of what those things are that strings two strangers together, and makes them become friends. I was into this flow.
     
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    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Diggin' the music that's in you!
     
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