Black Poetry : Ready

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by poeticly_yours, Mar 9, 2004.

  1. poeticly_yours

    poeticly_yours Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Are you ready

    Let me know

    Because I’m about to give you some food for your soul

    Just sit back relax and chill

    And listen to the words I’m about to spill

    If I come to harshly

    than please tell me

    Cause I don’t wanna step to you too profoundly

    Sweetie you don’t have to be nervous

    Cause simply im here just to do you a service

    So sit back boy and just let me go

    Ok you ready cause I’m about to flow
     
  2. blaquebutterfli

    blaquebutterfli Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    beautiful, very nicely done
     
  3. deepy

    deepy going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    you are flowing nicely...
    flow on
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    sitting back
    relax
    ready to feel
    ya flow
    wanna know
    about ya
    poetic show
    let it go !

    I hear ya let da ink run
     
  5. poeticly_yours

    poeticly_yours Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks

    thank you for the positive feedback
    I'm glad your like my poem :spinn:
     
  6. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    nicely done
    enjoyed this
    Peace
    Angel
     
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