Black Poetry : Ready to Fall in Love?

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by HODEE, May 3, 2009.

  1. HODEE

    HODEE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Ready to Fall in Love?
    Have you Already Fallen?

    The Hand
    Of Your Lover
    Has been Defined

    Revealed Explained
    Truly Written
    IntoTime

    Captured
    In a Word
    That is sure to Kiss

    This Love
    Waits Patiently

    Years
    Have Passed
    Months in Fact

    You Met
    You Kissed
    Shared Ecstasies

    In Fact
    Cloud Nine
    Seventh Heaven
    Called by many Names

    What you Two
    Have Shared
    Can Not
    Be Contained

    Inside
    In Time
    In Moments

    It can be Seen
    Must Make
    The Pact

    Travel to Them

    Travel with Them

    As Long
    As it Happens
    Happens Soon!
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    whoaaaaaa!
    who window u been lookin in this was da kinda love i await for to seek out and feel
    flow head on bruh !
     
  3. cherryblossom

    cherryblossom Banned MEMBER

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    Hodee, this was so full of hope and optimism in a recaptured love.


    It made me think of Peaches & Herb: "Reunited and it feels so good..."
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Feels like one of those meant to be loves, wonderful when that happens. Enjoyed your flow.
     
  5. HODEE

    HODEE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you cherryblossom.

    That is me and trinitys song. Sorry you can't sing it any longer..joking..::rolleyes::driveby::devil::wink::flowers::laugh:

    I do want to sing that one in chat duet style.

    If Sister trinity is late.. would you honer me by singing with me cherryblossom?

    I have to print out the words so I don't mess up my part.

    Thanks for the read.
    Its early and I haven't slept yet.. :sleep:dark humor.. has me in it's grip.
     
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    HODEE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank You watz.. you always have great insight.
    A love that is meant ...so right watz
     
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    enjoyed your flow Hodee!:terrific:
     
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    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    yes yes

    how did i miss this man

    you know i'm not mad at the love

    and i'm not mad at the rush service either

    we ALL need love

    peace
     
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    Aww....
    This made my heart melt.
    :terrific::terrific::terrific:
     
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    Love takes you there...as you have written so well. Lovely flow, Hodee

    epiphany:heart:
     
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