Black Poetry : Reading You

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by TotalView, Feb 20, 2012.

  1. TotalView

    TotalView Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    up at 2am holding on to your love poems
    feeling your right index finger slipping around my heart
    pulling it forward, allowing my love to flow easy
    as your words of passion melt on the roof of my mouth

    your gentle deep and manly verse
    lingers at the edge of my breath
    its tenderness inking haiku in calligraphy
    up and down my spine

    "Through and through
    by way of love"
    I will remain true, keeping only
    only your words close to my heart
    until you can get here
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Just too beautiful
     
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    Sweet piece!
     
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    Thank you Brother Poet $$RICH$$ and Sister Poet Guttapoetfromny for the read and kind words.

    (smile)
     
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    Very scencially written!:)
     
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