Black Poetry : Reading me in the stars

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  1. lilpea

    lilpea Moderator STAFF

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    Reading me in the stars ​

    Do you even know what u did? ​
    You read my soul...​
    You freed my spirit it's not locked any more...​
    And I wonder?...​
    And I wonder?​

    You have opened up my mind so I could really see what I had only imagine...​
    You've shown me my sun, my moon, my in's and my out's...​
    And now i have no doughts....​
    And I wonder?...​
    And I wonder?​

    One sister said it's a new day, because of u, I really look forward to tomorrow...​
    And now I really have no sorrows...​
    Life is good, life is great, time to look and seek for the knowledge...​
    And I wonder?...​
    And I wonder?​

    I wonder about you!​


    Lilpea :1on1:
     
  2. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    one would be surprise what dem stars may hold
    i feel u brother
     
  3. baller

    baller Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    lilpea...

    when we meet that special someone, we always wonder IF SHE CAN TRULY BE THIS SPECIAL and WHEN WILL THAT OTHER SHOE DROP because we're not accustomed to finding ALL THINGS that make us happy wrapped up in ONE PACKAGE. when it finally sets in, we still wonder IF IT CAN REALLY LAST. we do all this wondering INSTEAD OF ENJOYING WHAT WE HAVE.

    enjoy your cake...and pie...and every other desert she has to offer.:)

    ENJOYED THE READ.
     
  4. lilpea

    lilpea Moderator STAFF

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    Lesson well learned bro.....

    Lilpea:1on1:
     
  5. Da Street So'ja

    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    great work PEA

    even greater the tribute you pushed forward here poet

    peace

    welcome to my side of town

    lol:great:
     
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    Astrologer4U Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hmm, I wonder who this thread could be all about? Whoever it is about, that person should feel very flattered right about now...Hmmm...



    Astrologer4U
     
  7. 4EVERLUV

    4EVERLUV Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    lilpea:
    I always luv to see you posting here.
    Letting your creative juices flow....
    What an endearing write....I hope you
    do not have to wonder for long.



    Much Luv
     
  8. Astrologer4U

    Astrologer4U Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Oh, I don't think he had to wonder for long...


    Astrologer4U
     
  9. jus_dat_nice

    jus_dat_nice Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    love is a beautiful thing, isn't it?
    endearing and heartfelt write
    Awesome job
    :terrific:
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Some people are just that way...can open up a whole new world that was actually right there all the time...just a different way of seeing things. Beautiful write.
     
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