Black Poetry : ~reaching out~

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  1. LURK

    LURK Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Lord,
    i prayed many times in tha past ,
    and some,they went unanswered.....
    or so i thought,cause when i was lost,
    you gave me a chance
    and put me back on track....
    since Neveah was born,~ my eyes brightened up...
    all tha dyin faith in me heightened up,~i light a blunt..
    take one puff and sit it on tha ash tray....
    i beleive in tha bibles accounts ,of ya last day
    and it moved me.....
    then i think about how it was shown in that movie(The Passion)
    and i feel guilty cause day by day i live filthy and unruly....
    i look at some people,and im awed,they were saved cause you...
    i dunno how some others, could,~ hate on you...
    here n there i'll tell my peeps like ,"He took that pain for you"
    and He came here spreadin love, ~decades 'for you....
    i hold ya words in my heart ,my only ~safe haven..
    sorry for toiling with tha devils flowers , ~i stay blazin....
    im a soldier for tha cause ,full of sin,but i know tha laws..
    and i know which side i stand on in this Holy war
    i beleive that you close and open all doors
    i need more knowledge,~Lord~,im hopin for more....
    cause over this ,I WILL STRIKE A MAN DOWN QUICKLY...
    in ya name ,it might be lame ,but thats whut im aimin' for....
    with me God,i know it seems you have to dart me to get ya point acrossed
    i jot rhymes on the spot,sometimes i annoint the boards..
    i know deep down he speaks for you but i still stay lost
    good and bad,wrong and right,~still fixin' my flaws...
    im a put up a fight....and leave a message here in there in my songs....
    and my songs...well,im a pause..............................
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    relax and let him lead u to the path
    and leave the song written upon thy
    feet this was tyte and i felt every line
     
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    PositiveMindset Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    That's what's so good about life, everyday is another chance...

    I completely feel this.

    Peace.
     
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    LURK Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    THANX FOR CHECKIN THIS OUT!
     
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    one more prayer
    one more day
    for he leds you when you dont even know
    i love this piece
    poet of the week :hearts4:
     
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    you are my spiritual brother blessings be upon your house.
     
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    THIS IS A SOLID PIECE,WELL DONE!
     
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    Mmmmmmm may you find peace brotha Lurk :)

    something bout you tells me you wont stop till you do :read: :)
     
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    You speak highly of his influence in your path of life
    You inspire me to continue on my walk with God's path
    It's amazing to see how the world views God and what he wants from the individual
    Continue on in your search
     
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    The seed of faith has already been planted. All that needs to be done is to grow in it. Have faith, strength, and courage. He will see you through. Much love.
     
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