Black Poetry : re-written

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by TotalView, Oct 17, 2011.

  1. TotalView

    TotalView Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    my king here i come for you, my points of light lit, for the heat in me only you inspire
    keep your head up to the night sky my beautiful sexy and beloved black man
    watch my curvy body zig zagging before our precious moon, building speed as i glide
    the stars beating drums, my wings catch afire, pink smoke trailing behind me
    i move the clouds aside, take a deep breath in and then exhale the word LOVE
    blowing out the city lights. the only thing aglow the love in our heart and soul
    and my flight of passion on fire, writing across the sky

    BUTTERFLY~YOU TAKE ME THERE~ I'M ALL YOURS~ COME FLY IN MY LOVE

    spinning through the clouds to douse the fire but keep the heat and flames
    flying straight towards your inner glow to claim what is mine. no more games
    i'm gonna set the record straight, it is "him" who is my "butterfly" and has me in this sexy flight.
    sitting in his lap, his guitar singing "my turn" to my body and soul.
    me "listening" intensely to the "colors" of his heart
    "finding sky" in his sexy bodied voice.
    Feeling "deja vu" every time i hear him say, "hi sweetie. it's me. how are you?"
    my heart blush and "blink" and i am "breathless"
    "musing about you"
    "would you huh" come to me
     
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    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I am so moved by this.
    Your erotic gift impregnates the imagination.

    HAPPY belated BIRTHDAY, poetess.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Flyin , floatin , spinning and driftin
    inside da depth of thy warm embrace
    glidin cross da maze of love
    like an mayflower blooming
    da heart opens for da soul to land
    upon my spirit cometh as it's written
     
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    Thank you, Brother Poet 1poetsought, for the birthday wish. (smile)
     
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