Black Poetry : re-writing love

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by j'hiah, Feb 6, 2003.

  1. j'hiah

    j'hiah Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    2gether as we rewrite love's history
    and erase its blind theories
    piled by dirty hands and tainted hearts
    i will celebrate our revolution....

    if the world entered into our whirld
    they would re-enter revising their policies-
    more peace... less confusion... more God

    2night as i extend my hand to you
    to slow dance
    i'm thinking "there is no chance i can let her slip away."
    for in my own mind i am just learning how to trust- safely
    and this, i know is a miracle my personal cause
    to celebrate the transition you've help to create..

    there's no more "what's behind the curtain"
    for our bond is open, certain, so....

    "don't move"
    put on my favorite Gary Taylor groove
    knowing that nothing,
    not even if this record scratched will stop this ongoing
    revolution of love- nothing.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    yes sir re-write da love
    flow on poet!
     
  3. Sista Steele

    Sista Steele Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This flowed very nice.
     
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    man you may have come in late but you coming in with fire!!!
     
  5. j'hiah

    j'hiah Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanx...
     
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    MsDLite Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    **snaps**

    the revolution...
    ...and on love goes...
     
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    msluciousb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Beautiful piece/peace!

    Just stay humble and sweet, don't get the Bigg head like ya brothers have...

    Blessings On Ya House!
     
  8. Da Street So'ja

    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    um,
    i can't front on you poet

    i like how you lace it


    DSS
     
  9. Kitana

    Kitana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    any peace that involves slow dancin' is alright by me...

    K
     
  10. epiphany

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    J'hiah...

    Flow like only you know!....Lovely as usual.

    Epiphany :heart:
     
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