Black Poetry : Re: To Penis gone Wild..........

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  1. nevar

    nevar Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    At first I was blown
    But I look at my seeds that was sown

    How many of our brothers are dropping babies from coast to coast
    And then have the audacity to boast

    About how strong his stamina is
    Well if its so strong why dont have a job to support the kids

    While your rims cost more than your house
    Leaving your kids to be taken care of by another spouse

    And then wants to come around when your all alone
    Promising our babies you will take them into your home
    Just to find out that daddy loves to bone

    To bring other unfortunate babies into the world
    Man you really must be a squirrell

    Child support agency looking for you 10 years
    Your @ss right around the corner from me bringing me to tears

    Of how I could ever fall for a man like you
    When its really was the freaky things you do
    It's true

    Im guilty of partaking in something that I wasnt ready
    But let me tell ya Im strong holding it down keeping it steady

    As I raise my children in the right way
    Even tho I feel you must pay
    For your lay

    Keep on spreading that D around like its a pot of gold
    Remember playboy that thing one day will turn old

    And my kids when they grow up to understand
    That daddy wasnt really a man

    But a man who let his

    Penis go wild...................


    This is my own interpretation of Penis gone wild. No disrespect to Keita loved his flo. But this is what poured from his title.
     
  2. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    tyte drop on da remix
     
  3. abstract219

    abstract219 ...standing on the shoulders of giants MEMBER

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    REMIX!!!!....lol, this was true and tight, nevar....I like the response to the original...great to see it from a sista's viewpoint

    "How many of our brothers are dropping babies from coast to coast
    And then have the audacity to boast"

    No truer words have been spoken.....
     
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    black_soul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i wasn't ready for this family that you were ready to give
    didn't want you to keep it but i wanted her to live

    calling child support when you know i only make ten a hour
    tired to make it up to you with some candy and flowers

    i was running out of control i got three kids three angry women
    calling me a boy with no love no longer given

    sorry i had sex while you were making love
    got caught up cause your #$@% fit me like a glove

    i'm out here with no regrets labeled a dead beat dad
    why you looking at me like that girl i'm not that bad

    you were out there too don't play the innocent mother
    if you only been with me why does my daughter have to brothers

    we were out there playing the game and we lost
    now we up in court and you trying to make me pay the cost

    hows that right when i only get two days a week
    you getting all the first's and when my baby first speaks

    this ain't right why the judge always on your side
    putting all my business out there when i know you got stuff to hide

    like why you not working, why my daughter bare-foot while you got a new dress
    give it a rest
    i'm not impressed while you standing smile with my money in your hand my girl is getting less

    less attention less love why you put her in the middle
    telling her baby its gonna get better belive it will

    cause i might have gone wild but you gone crazy
    having nightmares about my daughter screaming save me

    such a big cost of going wild **** its high
    i'm sitting here working hard but you don't even try
     
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    cursed heart Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Different and tyte drop!
    Hey Nevar:roll:
     
  6. nevar

    nevar Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ahhhh see I was trying to be civilize
    then you had the audacity to come up with this jive
    while you walking around with your five

    see i was trying not to act ghetto
    but you got all up in my jello
    wont be no hello
    by the time im through your natural skin will be yellow

    see no way are you gonna go off like this
    and i cant help it if i fall for your trick

    why are you working two days a week
    i guess that why the government is supporting your seeds

    you chose to work that way
    so you can get less pay

    while my child have to depend on me
    let me tell ya negro children aint free
    they come with an fee

    talking all that trash
    just last week you was begging for this @ss

    listen dont point i made a mistake
    look who's handling her plate

    listen your 20 a week aint shyte
    and we mothers have to deal with this

    man what am i suppose to do with that
    im suprised you havent repo the money for a sack
    and dont think your sex was all that

    begging me not to take you to court
    remember what i told ya sorry sport

    them few minutes of pleasure shhh please
    if you really must know it was your homeboy who made me weak between my knees

    makes ya mad your boy been there
    i betcha right now you dont care
    yeah stare

    cause your less than a man
    sorry my child has your hand
    but im the stable one so i'll stand
    and rely on God cause he has a plan

    for me
    you'll see

    that it was you who have let your

    Penis go wild.........

    Know your place behind the rest of the deadbeats around here.
    :getout: :getout:
     
  7. nevar

    nevar Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks cursed heart, rich and abstract for the love shown

    and last to my poetic brotha Blacksoul thanks for your insight from a man point of view.
     
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    nevar Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    say Blacksoul what happen to ya comeback.:haha:
     
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    DANG GIRL THIS WAS LITERALLY OFF THE HOOK FOR REAL
     
  10. nevar

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    thanks for the props my love!
     
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