Black Poetry : RE-NEW'D

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by MRS. LADY, Dec 12, 2007.

  1. MRS. LADY

    MRS. LADY Banned MEMBER

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    Have we met?
    Or so does it just seem.....
    Have we met?
    Or are you just another dream...

    Don't I know you?
    Are you not my counter-part.....
    Don't I know you?
    I think your the one who holds the key to my heart...

    Are you my better half?
    I think so... matter fact I know....
    Am I your better half?
    I know so... because you just won't let me go...

    Let's take both better halves
    And make one solid heart.........
    My soul mate....

    I love you, and "us" is all we've got!
     
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    4EVERLUV Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Miss Lady:
    This was too sweet....


    Much luv
     
  3. Bluewater

    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hi Miss Lady
    I'm just a smiling.
    My first response to your flow
    was just like 4EVERLUV
    This is so sweet just
    like chocolate
    Much love... Keep inking.

    Peace~N~Love
     
  4. LovesDestiny

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    NICE!

    I loved it. I can really feel those words!!!!
     
  5. MRS. LADY

    MRS. LADY Banned MEMBER

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    ^^ thanks ya'll.... i see it's all love here..

    funny things ladies.. i'm too scared to give it to the intendee......

    the next best thing was sharing it with you!
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Such tender and endearing words here, poetess. If he gets the chance to read this, he's bound to love it. :)
     
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    Lloyd Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This is something i am always asking myself when i think i found love.Your end is really special.May it be true for all of us one day.
    I like your flow,really simple,really nice,you are just saying things the way your heart are conceiving them.
     
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    Miss Lady, let me offer you a bit of advice! Love and fear seem to go hand in hand. We want the joy that comes from love but not at the risk of rejection but girlfriend, life is shawter than shawt!!!! Be bold and couragious my sistah! Whatever you choose the decision is up to you!!!

    WONDERFUL FLOW!!!! I felt it down to the core!!!!
     
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    ok miss lady

    welcome to destee

    and i'm feeling this here poet

    nice

    nice
     
  10. PLATINUMILLITY1

    PLATINUMILLITY1 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    It just rocked really well sis
    I loved the Us
    It is all!!
    Snaps to you Miss Lady!!!!
    :golf: