Black Poetry : Re: Member ME

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by N2urSoul, Oct 5, 2001.

  1. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    The SOULOFASISTA

    I chased birds today
    then wrote this poem

    I sang a love song on a sphere
    then I came back home

    Changing high octaves
    through soundless fear
    wedged my voice into
    the bark of trees
    and wiped beads of sweat
    from tea green leaves

    ... Cleared my throat ...
    and my whispers clearly soared
    amongst those chased birds

    ... chaste words ...

    In the girth of your mind

    Do you ... perchance
    ... remember me?

    Do you ... remember
    the seat of a soul that
    for several weeks sat ~~ empty?

    Weak-ly

    Re: Member ME



    (c) 2001 SOULOFASISTA
     
  2. UL820

    UL820 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Re:member me

    REMEMBERED AS WIND
    Whispering truth
    in pieces of poetry
     
  3. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    UL820

    Thank you for your acknowledgement!!
     
  4. blakverb

    blakverb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Sheeeeee's baaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaack!!! After a rest, all great minds unveil profound thoughts that shake the world...do your thang I'll put on my seatbelt and helmet.

    100x.10="?"

    blak
     
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    Bishop Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    girl I'm glad you back......Not get where you belong....N2mySoul...
     
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    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    N2MYSOUL

    not forgotten
    amidst the rubble on the Isle of Manhattan
    NY2MYSOUL like sheets of satin
    you be forgotten?
    as long as i'm around that will never happen

    remembering you

    DSSNY
     
  7. VirtuousDove

    VirtuousDove Active Member MEMBER

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    I love this flow. It gives me a feeling of freedom and a joy of dancing with the wind. Keep doing what you do.

    Love
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    glad ya home

    as u flow sweet & strong
    as u be n2 my soul i hold
    ya wisdom close.....welcome back sugar pie..:kiss:
     
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