Black Poetry : re(a)lationship.

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by j'hiah, May 28, 2002.

  1. j'hiah

    j'hiah Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    lend me some sugar.. l am your neighbor
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    i need love
    a real love
    the kind i can feel love.

    i want to see love
    so close...
    i want to be love

    holding hands in the park?
    no.
    playing piano in the dark?
    no.
    but let us press towards the mark for our high calling
    forgetting those things which are behind
    not fast forwarding or rewinding but blinding ourselves in each others' sight

    in/between us there's so much light we have not seen
    and now this is so real to me
    no longer an eyedea full of joy and laughter
    but the part where there is no laughing matter.
    the pain
    the past
    the hurt

    let's make it work

    i need love
    a real love
    the kind i can feel love

    realationship
     
  2. Natasha

    Natasha Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    see this is the type of love I want to get and give in response
    the real love
    SPeak it cause you know it ! :x:
     
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    Kitana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this is complete love...and if you recognise that you have got to accept the whole person and all that comes with that person...and if you are willing to work towards binding your love together to make it whole...then you will have what you ask for..... sweet love...

    K
     
  4. poeticdelight

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    ReAl LoVe

    my love is your love
    your love is my love what heaven
    has in store none of us think of

    sorta like a peace dove floating
    in the sky up high above the clouds

    hydro-planic cry landing no longer
    in pain

    GOODBYE



    ReAl LoVe
     
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    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    jp.


    all i'll say 'bout this, bighead... oops i had meant
    to say lil brother (LOL)... is that i liked it... a very
    lot! g'on do the love thang then!! :)

    :heart: itsallLove, chile. (Nfinite-ly!)

    elayne.
     
  6. poeticdelight

    poeticdelight Member MEMBER

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    this line reminds me of a song

    i can't seem to put my finga' on it

    o yeah LL Cool J

    "i need love" :lol: :x:

    feelin' the love of your flow


    love,

    pd