Black Poetry : Raw

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by peppachatni, Jul 19, 2001.

  1. peppachatni

    peppachatni Member MEMBER

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    Sweet Tweed, how signifigant are the structures of thy five foliage.
    And still is thy name announced as infamous.

    For demos has distinguish you from the excellence of this earth,
    to rid you hideously below the endless dirt!

    OH, how i still remember my overwhelmed desires,
    Of just a few pulls from thy rolled "gar" lit with fire!

    Daydreams of the far beyond elevation of my high,
    My continuos laughter confuting the slumberous look of my eyes.

    When the Highness descends in the coolness of the breeze,
    Along comes the unbearable craving for hunger better known as the munchies!

    So why do the demos ride you down to the floor?
    The reason is because they fret the extrodinary power from
    the RAW!

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  2. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Well done poet! Let's call this a "Chronic"ally clever piece!


    One :heart:
     
  3. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    VERY WELL WRITTEN...((RAW))

    DA BEAUTY IN YO DISPLAY OF ART
    SURELY I FEEL THE DEPTH OF IT ALL
    THANK U QUEEN:heart: :kiss:
     
  4. Destee

    Destee destee.com STAFF

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    Haaaaaay Peppachatni :wave:
    like the way you come right on in
    and make yourself at home
    we like it like that

    nice peace

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  5. Hunter

    Hunter Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    welcome to the house of

    *FLOWS*;)