Black Poetry : RAW

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by watzinaname, Dec 29, 2003.

  1. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    RAW
    The way that I am,
    So, handle with care,
    try to give a good da--.
    RAW
    The way I see you,
    without all the glitter,
    an all natural view.
    RAW
    The way you took my heart,
    You just cut to the chase
    with the real, right from the start.
    RAW
    The way you love me right,
    naked, panting, and
    driven all through the night.
    RAW.....
     
  2. Randee

    Randee Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    RAW
    the pain from my past
    insecure,wondering
    if this will last
     
  3. Mawelulu1Luv

    Mawelulu1Luv Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Succinct Direct RAW

    Nice Scribe
    Write On!
     
  4. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Randee, nice flow...sort of sad though.
    Mawelulu1, thankyou, I tried to just throw it out there, raw.
     
  5. Randee

    Randee Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    yeah, that kind of mood today, sorry.
     
  6. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Oh, no need to be sorry, Randee, flow with what you know and feel.
     
  7. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    raw.....i can flow on dis...
    i likes this flow on..Angel
     
  8. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Raw
    da flava of love
    the mission of hope
    Raw
    the pain it pose
    the warmth behind
    Raw
    the better tomorrow
    new beginnings
    the way a love come
    how ya heart will shine
    Raw
     
  9. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Mzblkangel glad you liked the flow, thankyou.
    Rich, thankyou for just flowing with it as you do.
     
  10. msluciousb

    msluciousb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I like this!

    Like my love
    Raw
    from the cheek to the jaw
    Like my sex
    from your feet to your neck
    Raw
    Like my sense of humor
    Raw
    Like an unchecked tumor
    Raw
    Like the love of the primitive
    RAW
    yeah I can get into this...
    Blessings On Your House!
    BJS aka Msluciousb