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  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Consider it a jewel in your crown
    that u have vanquished me
    yet whom feet i kissed a million tymes

    Then yes with closed eyes
    i abandon myself to u
    bondedly gaven my love openly

    As i close my eyes and mentally
    i taste u , feel u , need u
    where we clash bodies hypnoticly

    Ye God what a night we spent
    together in da temple of our exsistance
    for my loveth i behold u in faith

    The secrecy movements of love between
    us art thy deepest most mystic treasure
    u became ravishly amazing wit inner beauty
    and out pour of comforting love

    O' ye my sweetest maketh me thy King
    to behold thee unconditionally
    and keepest thy loveth in da grace of morrow
    as i stand before u to completion

    Your ravished warmth of love
    has captured me in da waves
    where only hearts are carried
    be not afraid of my armz that hold u so
    nor my love that keepest thee

    for u art ravishedly enterlaced
    my i kiss thee one more time mentally
    without a touch as thy lipest partake and bond
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Gee, this was like a gentle sensual breeze of rapture. If it's this good mentally, I wonder what would happen up close and personal?
     
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    MRS. LADY Banned MEMBER

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    O' ye my sweetest maketh me thy King


    ^^^^^^ REAL SPIT...

    will you know what to do with a queen????????
    (hypothetical)
     
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    MRS. LADY Banned MEMBER

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    yo... not to go on and on... just read this again

    this is hott and deep......

    get em all on the right page!!! bigups!
     
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    I love how you worded this piece. Its sensual and romantic.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Watz when da water runs da river thy face is seen again
    forth da love flows rapidly to caress the moments thank u !

    hypothetically yes i would knoweth forth i would shower thee
    in da mist of love and comfort to listen intently to her whispers
    and vow my loyality unto her grace and bath her in sweet essence
    for thy queeneth would be my all and all . Thank u for the love & support Miss Lady

    Fattn when thy heart speaketh words art laid thank u dearly
     
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    PLATINUMILLITY1 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Listen $$RICH$$
    I gotta Stay in cool Water for a long time
    Don't Do this......
    I am being Saved Man!!!!!
     
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    PLATINUMILLITY1 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Back In da day......
    I would have been all over it...lol
    Lets talk about.......hmmmmmm
    Dancing....Lol
    You make My Heart Melt $$RICH$$
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    PLATINUM....
    Through da gift of hearts
    and the cool soul untouched
    save thou self yet let self go
    and enterlace in da fire of love
    Dance we shall
    for every moment is graced
    and continue to melt
    i promise to be good n' nice
    lol.
     
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    Hey Brother $$RICH$$
    This poem is so ravishing. The impact of your flow
    is awesome. It does leave one with a glow.
    So lovely

    Peace~N~Love
     
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