Black Poetry : Ravished & Devined

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  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Shell i be ur companion
    or yet be yo slave?
    do u desire me
    or is it u loveth me ?

    When ya passion is satisfied
    will u thank me at all?

    When i've made u happy
    will u know how to tell me ?

    can u feel me near forth
    i am beside u always

    I am the unknown being
    of whom must be sought
    forth and dreamrth of

    In ur eyez of amazement
    da womanly love of warmth
    glar out like a beam of light
    the kind to brighten da night
    my charriot of fire in da stillo flyght
    taketh me to da land of unknown

    In ya eyes in which i see da sparkles
    like those that fatten in harems
    the taste of ya lips bring da bittersweet
    and my heart is ovawhelm
    beattin fast like da rain drums
    not far i see vision of u
    my Nubian Queen
    dis devine emotional feelings
    is by faith none other than faith
    and when u fall fast asleep within my
    arms i'll lay awake to be yo protection
    early morning i'll grace u wit tender
    affection

    Soon we glide to a directional bliss
    of gentle kisses and spoon away
    in da skies hand N' hand
    da destiny of our love in ecstasy bound
    better then any love found around
    da pleasure of ravished & devine love
    takes da solo man from me and give
    me da men of honor to withhold in a unity
    bond of what earth call relationship

    As we dance our way to a romantic
    romance of two .....me & u
    words cannot speaketh of us
    just waves of magic moments untouched

    may we continue our flyght together
    in what is call foreverness
    and be one whole to da soul
    and let da mind free of whats unknown
    as bodies rumble in da night

    stars that hold u i have touched
    the winds that blow u i have heard
    the essence u pose i've tasted
    the battle u face i still fight
    the GOD u come to know is my Father
    da spirit of one's soul is heavenly
    and i will always be within reach
    the devine love is of me
    whats ravished is my heart
    u and i
    me & u
    the us
    we
    one whole
    :heart: :heart: :heart: :) :heart: :heart: :heart:
     
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    Legendof_1_Spirit Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ...>floats in>

    What a richly textured piece U have constructed here my friend. The Ravished & Devined is so sublime! It captures both the heart and mind. While speaking to the soul at the same time. From beginning to end it is a wonder and a joy. Thanks for the sunday inspiration.

    <floats out<...
     
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    $$RICH-NE$$.


    you are sumthin' else!!... :D

    (& i likes it! a very lot!!)

    keep doin' dat Love thang... it becomes you!

    :heart:
    Elayne.
     
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    hey 1_spirit

    indeed it has da ring of a devined texture
    thats so ravished to da mental wit love
    big Thankz 4 da read ya words comes as needed it:D
     
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    sunshyne u know

    up here how bright one's mind become
    as da soul take hold of the heart that's
    lovable in spirit it's Ravished & devined
    Thanks 4 reading me sistah!:heart: :kiss:
     
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    $Rich$ly sweet piece. Very enjoyable. Thank you. ;)


    Poetically Turn'd Out!
    CCBSKYN :heart:
     
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    wit all means and my pleasure glad u enjoyed da read
    thank u ........coco...coz u r devined
     
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    $$$$$RICH$$$$$
    you stay gettin' yours huh
    go playa

    dssNY
     
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    so'ja man just movin wit da wind dat's devine.....thankz bru!
     
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    it's back and time has cum for another devine taste!
     
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