Quiet Poetry Lounge : RAVISH BLISS ( another love confession)

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    I am ravishly captivated in the delima of love
    I've abandon myself unto you like a blind man
    to love you more then my own skin
    leaves me in da depth of my morrow delirious

    With joy i partaken in your glist
    as my heart is full of desires to linquish
    as i bestow my love ravishly i give myself
    in ecstacy to your sweet embrace

    Shall i be your companion or your slave
    will u desire me to love me
    I have kissed you a million tyme as u of me
    everytime the brisk of breeze blow it is I

    consider it a jewel in your crown
    that you have vanquished me
    whom was never completely conquered
    save by your comforting love
    I so give all my cares upon yo feet
    Ravishly in a bliss untouchable.

    Do share my world !

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    i am cloistered and living in your love
    for i have abandoned all pride and pain
    for love can only survive in true peace
    i love you and desire you more than
    my pitiful words can convey
    place you heart over my heart
    and claim that that is only yours
    there is more i wish to say
    but right now i am so full
    in the spirit
    of His and your love
    thank you, Father for his love
    (joyful tears)
     
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    big thankz for da feed on this joint ravishly
     
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    Take my hand and dance with me for a moment please
    down here by the brook. Let's move nice and slow.
    Look me in my eyes because there's a few things I need to say
    and I want you to witness the truth for yourself because my words
    may fail but my soul would never lie. Just keep your gaze with mine.

    I wish to speak plainly. Because you see...I'm in love.
    Love rests in your pen but I'd never written
    a "love" poem before loving you. And you are the only man
    I will ever write one to and for.
    (pull me closer please)

    "I am ravishly captivated in the delima of love
    I've abandon myself unto you like a blind man"

    What words could I possibly use to respond to this?
    "I've abandon myself unto you like a blind man"
    Each time I read it, I close my eyes, place my hand
    over my heart and wait in a moment of recovery.
    I try to type something poetic but all my fingers can manage are
    I love you. I love you. I love you. I love you.
    (twirl me around please)

    "to love you more then my own skin"

    I want to write something pretty
    but what words do I choose to respond to a man
    who feels this way?


    "to love you more then my own skin"
    I can't write but i imagine and plan
    the ways i will show you how much
    i appreciate you and your love
    i would give you examples but
    i don't want to spoil it
    (dip me please)

    "as i bestow my love ravishly i give myself
    in ecstacy to your sweet embrace"

    Can you understand how deeply these words
    seep inside every part of me?
    and the wonderful part is...i know you mean every
    word even the "to"
    "as i bestow my love ravishly i give myself
    in ecstacy to your sweet embrace"
    and i think, does he know he is restoring
    my faith in love (black love)
    but no sweet poetry comes
    only words like these
    I love you. I love you. I love you.
    (pull me close to you again)

    "save by your comforting love"
    yes, saved by your comforting love
    (kiss me please)
     
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    suga smackkkkkkk:rolleyes:
     
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    Da bliss of love returnz
     
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