Quiet Poetry Lounge : raspberry rain & erotic rhythms

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by THA HOOKUPMAN, Nov 12, 2004.

  1. THA HOOKUPMAN

    THA HOOKUPMAN Banned MEMBER

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    She is the sweetest song
    Deeply drenched in culture
    Carrying with her the torch of
    Strength and sophistication
    An instrumental of
    Divine inspiration

    Her touch is raspberry rain
    And she
    Holds my hand
    As we swim
    Against the grain
    Through the passions of erotic rhythms
    And melodies that skipped measures,
    The deeper we indulged,
    The more engulfed in the pleasures
    It was never
    Nothing about money or fame
    Or using each other for political gain
    It was
    Just
    About
    The music

    Her voice is a tattoo
    Spray-painted in my ears
    Filling my imagination with all of the
    Colors of the rainbow and
    All of the infinite possibilities to
    Create
    Art
    My heart was a palette and she knows
    How to combine countless mixtures and
    Give life to the masterpiece
    Known as
    Me

    She is my Side-B,
    Kindred in the splendid sounds of silence
    Strictly vinyl,
    The final voice, acappella,
    Extending eternity to my ears
    On earth ,,,,,,,,,hookup :jump: :jump: :jump: :jump: :jump: :thinking: :thinking: :thinking: :thinking: :thinking:
     
  2. angelicsage

    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :spinstar: :spinstar: Sensational :spinstar: :spinstar:



    Swollen clouds of sinless passion
    Hover
    …..over
    you

    I pray my words…
    Are as thunderstorms...

    For surely?!

    ……….you love dancing in the rain

    (((Allow)))
    ……..your voids
    ………………to overflow
    ………………………….in splashing waterfalls

    Of raspberry kisses
    ………Falling relentless

    Your poetry leaves me...
    Breathless
    ...............-ly adrift in a sky of anticipation…

    Loving this...
    Sage :spinstar:
     
  3. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    man this one must be one of the finest
    i relly love how you did this piece...wow
     
  4. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    A tapestry of thoughts woven into the sky for us to float in...marvelous.
     
  5. gempis

    gempis Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Amazing collection of images to dazzle the mind, brothah. Your talent knows no limits.
     
  6. angelicsage

    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ...just getting my daily fix of the hottest poet I know :D :hearts2: (but I am a lil bias...lol)
     
  7. queentswana

    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    "Awesome" has it's place, and tonight it surely rests here. Well written hook.
     
  8. 1poetsought

    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Rasberry Rain & Erotic Rhythms is a HIT with me.
     
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