Black Poetry : RASPBERRY ODYSSEY

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by N2urSoul, Apr 3, 2001.

  1. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

    Joined:
    Mar 17, 2001
    Messages:
    3,955
    Likes Received:
    1
    Occupation:
    Director, Community Employment Strategies
    Location:
    Minneapolis, MN
    Ratings:
    +1
    A medieval Knight
    in search of spiritual,
    intellectual, and sexual freedom
    you turned to your maiden
    and said "I want some of your rasberry cream"
    I couldn't help but oblige and play into
    your fantasy
    so I ... unzipped your pants slowly -
    as I kissed your forehead
    and licked my way down...down to
    the center of a silver mounted navel
    piercing
    that gently sounded 'ping' as
    I clicked it with my tongue ring
    your nature rose with
    splendid bliss and gratitude knowing that
    your princess was near
    then you calmly laid back to relax
    as the warm, moist breath was released from your chest
    ...closing your eyes you heard
    my last whispers softly in the air
    mmmmmmm~
    I said, let me kiss you...right....here

    That night I had taken you on a
    pursuit of happiness
    you were no longer a Knight
    you emerged and were crowned
    ODYSSEUS, King of Ithaca,
    submerged into my world of fervor...
    set to wander in my land
    for what seemed like an eternity,
    (but prior to the fall of Troy)
    ...subconciously
    you counted the number of
    strokes...
    up and down
    as I, now Queen of Troy, rode
    upon your dark horse - bare backed
    through the wooded forest
    even long after the
    Trojan War (wore)
    all that you and I were seeking
    - - was found
    in glory
    as we recounted
    countless images
    that were so vivid
    when I 'went down'
    the adventurous road
    on a journey
    which started as
    A QUEST
    ... in search of
    a Queen's
    ~Raspberry Odyssey
     
  2. GQ

    GQ Well-Known Member MEMBER

    Joined:
    Mar 17, 2001
    Messages:
    2,220
    Likes Received:
    3
    Occupation:
    United States Air Force
    Location:
    South Jersey
    Ratings:
    +3
    Whooooaa!!!!!

    N2???? What up wit ya??!!??


    Ya making a brotha go

    ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~Woo Woo Woo~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

    This "rasberry" trek is delicious!!!!!

    After ya travel up and down my rigid road, I'll most def
    journey along ya curvilinear concourse!!!! :hot:


    :heart:
    GQ
     
  3. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

    Joined:
    Mar 17, 2001
    Messages:
    3,955
    Likes Received:
    1
    Occupation:
    Director, Community Employment Strategies
    Location:
    Minneapolis, MN
    Ratings:
    +1
    GQ~

    So I assume - you LIKE?!
    Woo Woo Woo?????
    Just gettin' into the 4-play
    in the medieval sense of things!!
     
  4. GQ

    GQ Well-Known Member MEMBER

    Joined:
    Mar 17, 2001
    Messages:
    2,220
    Likes Received:
    3
    Occupation:
    United States Air Force
    Location:
    South Jersey
    Ratings:
    +3
    Like ain't the word poetess!!!!

    Woo


    ....Woo


    .......and Woo again!!!!!!!!!!


    :heart: ery minute of ya!!!

    Peace
    GQ
     
  5. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

    Joined:
    Mar 17, 2001
    Messages:
    3,955
    Likes Received:
    1
    Occupation:
    Director, Community Employment Strategies
    Location:
    Minneapolis, MN
    Ratings:
    +1
    GQ~

    You are too kind!
    But I'm definitely glad
    I can 'yank' yo' chain
    wit dis piece---
    like 'ping' - the sound and the
    click of my tongue ring!! hee hee hee

    Luv ya' doll...
     
  6. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

    Country:
    United States
    Joined:
    Mar 21, 2001
    Messages:
    69,983
    Likes Received:
    3,978
    Gender:
    Male
    Occupation:
    BUSINESS owner
    Location:
    Da~WINDY*CITY //CHICAGO
    Ratings:
    +4,178
    WELL NOW THAT WAS VERY TASTY
    UMMMMMMM!! DOWN LOW!
     
  7. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

    Joined:
    Mar 17, 2001
    Messages:
    3,955
    Likes Received:
    1
    Occupation:
    Director, Community Employment Strategies
    Location:
    Minneapolis, MN
    Ratings:
    +1
    $$RICH$$

    Glad you liked the
    taste of the Raspberry Odyssey dear!
     
  8. BSWGemini

    BSWGemini New Member MEMBER

    Joined:
    Apr 4, 2001
    Messages:
    1
    Likes Received:
    0
    Ratings:
    +0
    Drinched in curiousity

    You make a brutha wish you put that creativity in physical motion. Girl, your flow was fine like you.
     
  9. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

    Joined:
    Mar 17, 2001
    Messages:
    3,955
    Likes Received:
    1
    Occupation:
    Director, Community Employment Strategies
    Location:
    Minneapolis, MN
    Ratings:
    +1
    BSWGemini

    A Gemini - eh? This must be your twin talkin' now?!
    :)
    Thanks for the comps- BSW...
     
  10. MapleXtract

    MapleXtract Well-Known Member MEMBER

    Joined:
    Mar 27, 2001
    Messages:
    481
    Likes Received:
    0
    Location:
    Connecticut
    Ratings:
    +0
    Whoa...

    You are rippin' it, ma. You put medieval imaginations to work with this one. I'm sure these guys are eatin' it all up; and I ain't mad at ya, sis...
     
Loading...