Black Poetry : raspberry darkness

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  1. thepoetsean

    thepoetsean Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    mmone


    sometimes my mind drifts--

    thoughts of your raspberry darkness--
    cloud my sub-concious--
    'til i'm un-concious--

    mental arousal can't justify--
    nor appease the clench--

    your frame has on every blink of both my eyes--

    blind stares and blank expressions overcome men--
    and numb men--
    because of this one--

    wo-men.

    i hope you to be mine--
    remain mine--
    and at the same time--
    help me to gain mind--

    because you got me losing it...

    (gimme...u.)

    sean
     
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    Oh Lord!!!... (& that's really what i said when i was done reading this)

    SEAN...

    (i had to leave the TP off for dis one) :)

    yessss... indeed! this was TyghtToDeath!!
    whoeva she may be... is a lucky woman & dats
    fa sho!! dayum!! this kinda made me wanna
    give u me... :wink:

    flow like ya know poet...

    Peace&Love...
    Sunshyne~
     
  3. N2urSoul

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    Extremely exquisite...
    What else can be said?!
    Terrific & Lovely -
     
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    Sean,

    Nice *** flow most def!!!

    Keep on comin' wit it fella!!

    Peace
    GQ
     
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    thepoetsean Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thank you all!

    so glad y'all felt this one!!!!




    sean
     
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    str8 butter smooth classic...wow
    tyte write poet
     
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    This was red hot poet
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    Someone's mental was taken over in this one by...she. Captivating.
     
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    how i remember dis one
     
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