Quiet Poetry Lounge : RARE 13th ROSE

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  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Here is a ROSE
    i so pose
    the 13th rare
    fill wit care as i
    break it down
    spread it around
    this ROSE is RARE

    it cast a color of spray
    from inside out and weeps
    never sleeps and deep

    it's beauty is ................
    a redish dip mixed
    with a purple and gold
    wrap in black and blooms
    deep it rise and weep

    this 13th cry from inside
    it sho up in every yard
    the redish is the blood
    drippin from the purple
    heart of passion and the
    gold is the essence it
    poses yet the black is
    the struggle of millions
    it weep when we sleep
    it rise it's powerful and
    humble it cast a beauty
    in a war from door 2 door
    this ROSE is one that grows
    on it own need no water
    and stand strong weeps
    when dis struggle seem
    wrong and shine when
    united unity bond
    it was planted many many
    years ago by a
    far means of AFRICA
    the ancestors of us
    set it out to someday be free
    it was the ROSE of Freedom
    now their are billions blooming

    O' yes the 13th is RARE
    it's a jewel of a reminder
    it blossome wit care
    i've taste it often before
    and saw it rise and shine
    i even heard it weep
    from the deep deep roots
    of our people our forefathers
    it also a blessing to our
    culture of beings and help
    set forth the direction of
    a mission a war on hope
    to be truely free
    the blackness is so shinny
    like a coal black
    within it's fill with a juice of
    pain and lack of understanding
    of the AFRICAN lands
    it a RARE gem of 13
    it's like a key to a journey of free
    very nice Rose and unique

    it has awaken many to transform
    great worriors and solo Kingz
    now let u see the RARE ROSE
    and know it's meaning and beings
    as the 13th
    today i pass out one each to every
    face it meet and read the great
    com-bo-nation of multi colour will
    open eyes and it has a aroma so
    mild yet strong to seep into mentals
    please take one and start taking place
    in the struggle so we defeat the labled
    odds lay on our birth bed .....


    HAPPY KWANZAA AFRICA MOTHERLAND
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this was beautiful
    wonderful
    touching and all
    love it ...very warm
    i think you get it...
    this was posed so well
    i love it.....now....
    i hear ya and i feel ya on dis...
    many blessings to ya..
    Peace
    Angel
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    A rose of knowledge, strength, and courage..Oh if it could be so, and all we'd have to do is inhale. This is just wonderful.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    thank u Ola indeed this
    a RARE ROSE of struggling
    facing the live of pain
    and how many of our ancestors
    was shiped stolen to America
    whip by chains and shackled
    by feet worked to death sistah's
    virginity strip and cries of hunger
    the struggling pain of forefathers
    before us and now beyond us
    still weep from da womb to be free
    unto u carry the 13th ROSE

    Thankz Angel .............
    hear it know it and feel it
    forth our people has struggle
    far too long in the hour of hope
    millions died so we may have
    a light to walk in yet not free
    but this RARE 13th ROSE
    will be our guide to bonding
    unite wit unity.......... peace
     
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    Thank u watzinaname .....
    indeed this 13th RARE ROSE
    hold it and honor it forth it's
    our true essence of power and glory
    let it not be in vain
    our struggle is not won nor are we defeated

    unto u thankz and happy kwanzaa in peace
    da bonding starts here in healing
     
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    aw, this is so deeply touching, $$RICH$$. I am lovin this mightily
     
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    gempis..........humble thankz
    the ROSE of RARE is the 13th
    one we have not yet come to terms with
    and it is there it was planted many many
    years ago by the ancestors in hope of freedom

    it all started in the corn & cotton plantations
     
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    Oh So Wonderful

    i am so overwhelm by this flow
    i read it oh so many times
    and it is sketch into my heart
    as i embrace and re-read again
    this wonderful flow
    you have compose
    of the rare rose
    Peace unto you
    Peace
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    yes sistah bluewater
    the RARE 13th ROSE
    is composed in our
    struggle of the creator
    of creation the true
    color of our culture
    and values untouched
    it's been family so long
    ago and for everyone plucked
    a ending of hardship and
    freedom bound .....Thank u sistah Queen

    HAPPY Kwanzaa!
     
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    the rare ROSE growing
    daily to remind us of our
    ancestors or faith our journey
    it's the rare 13th ROSE planted
    many many yesteryears ago
    now unity we stand and a people
    unto da black awareness from da
    orbs of our souls and speak in
    great pride as we mix and capture
    piece of the freedom which we bound
    to defeat and make it to the hilltop
    i might not get there but i will feel
    da depth of our people in hol-la-nu-ya !
    let da candle burn all 7
     
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