Black Poetry : Rapture

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by poeticdelight, Feb 7, 2003.

  1. poeticdelight

    poeticdelight Member MEMBER

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    with your arms wrapped gently around me
    your body fits like a glove
    squeezing in such emotion

    your thoughts expression of love

    your eyes in similar motion
    comes peering through my soul
    sending vibes of heavenly sensations
    seen underneath my clothes

    stripped down to the bare essentials
    I'm falling for you
    like a long stem red rose

    with your arms wrapped around me
    your body fits like a glove
    squeezing in such emotion

    your thoughts expression of love

    your eyes in similar motion
    comes peering through my soul
    sending vibes of heavenly sensations
    seen underneath my clothes



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  2. msluciousb

    msluciousb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    All right now another one for the ladies!

    Alright now! This was extremely well written! I liked it a lot!
    Keep it HOT!

    Blessings On Ya House!
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    very beautiful one for da ladies but da men still rumbling strong
    gurl ya work dis to perfectional love
     
  4. poeticdelight

    poeticdelight Member MEMBER

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    thanx MsB

    there's a lot more where that came from

    i'm just getting warmed up

    ;)

    pd
     
  5. poeticdelight

    poeticdelight Member MEMBER

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    Thanx Richy Rich

    for all the fellas who didn't respond

    don't hate :lol:

    pd
     
  6. elayne.

    elayne. Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    pee-did-dee.


    nice & soothing flow, chile!!
    i enjoyed... Much-ly!! :)

    itsallLove,
    elayne.
     
  7. Da Street So'ja

    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    mmmmmmmmm

    and i'm caught all in it

    DSS
     
  8. Kitana

    Kitana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    pd..I have to agree...a man can make love to a woman just with his eyes...they have so much to say...and keep em comin'!

    K
     
  9. poeticdelight

    poeticdelight Member MEMBER

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    thanx elayne

    let's show these guys whose boss :lol:

    pd

    :x:
     
  10. poeticdelight

    poeticdelight Member MEMBER

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    i got DSS

    :lol: they're falling down like London bridges

    pd
     
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