Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by epiphany, Sep 10, 2001.
NOW U KNOW YA JUST
TOOK ME WAY OUT THERE AND BACK
I REALLY LOVE DIS ONE
SO POETICALLY SPRAYED
Sorry, it took me a while to reply, have been doing a lot of reflecting and praying.
Romantic poetry always takes me way out on a limb
where daffodils bloom and a summer moon
transcends the feelings from the heart
where a summer breeze
flows through the trees
and a picnic in the park
with sparkling eyes
professing my emotions
thank you for this clear expression of the purest of life's gifts...
love it love it!
Isn't it a revelation that someting so simple as the word... love
has so many interpretations, can stir up so many emotions,
yet is the hardest of the emotions to express at times
and still we long for it
we do foolish things because of it
and the desire is so strong for it
that we are not whole until
we experience it
and so we perish from the lack of it
because our inner being suffers.
this piece showed the excitement and the peacefulness of love..the two ends of the spectrum...nice words...
The things we are willing to endure for loves sake. Ain't it a trip. This is a wonderful piece. Epiphany,.... keep having poetic epiphanies please. This is some good stuff.
I don't know how I missed this splendid piece.
Scribeaboutit! It helps.
yeah!! as it capture u in the mist of sweetness
the rapture of lovin is grand of woman & man
from the brightest stars above
soulful sounds of gentle love .....i know dis feeling !!!!
I love it. itz funny the differences and similarities people feel concerning love. I like your wording of it, keep it coming please.
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