Black Poetry : Rapture of Anew

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  1. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thinking back
    when you….
    was always there
    breakin my fall and
    mending my heart…..
    loving and holding me
    all night long
    walks in the park
    feeding me fruit
    back rubs and showers
    as the storm moves in
    we held on..just in case
    I wasn’t sure you
    Always made me feel
    better
    dayum !!!
    we was in tune
    flowin our own beat…
    doing our own steps
    rocking and folding
    you was there
    never letting go…
    friends hated the sight of
    two in love as we
    played our song
    mentally..
    grinning and kissing
    playin tag in the sun
    running in the snow
    dancing when no
    one else can
    hear the music
    but…..
    as we drift apart…..
    part of me is lost not
    understanding
    sorta of confused
    knowing that I love you
    and you love me
    and what we share
    can never die
    for he got your name
    and in heaven’s eyes
    I know he is fine
    soul mate of my mate
    in harmony arms he be
    but our love is still alive
    so how do we start new
    and let the pass go….

    2004
     
  2. PurpleMoons

    PurpleMoons Administrator STAFF

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    Beautiful scribe!
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    this was sweetly laid out from the visional past
    to the anew future letting go can be uplifting
     
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    thatgirl74 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I like this beautiful flow.
    Nice work
     
  5. Nita

    Nita Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    wow

    Dancing when no one else can hear the music..wow..simply beautiful sis
    Nita
    :heart:
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    The flow of this is playful and inviting. Nice scribe.
     
  7. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    PurpleMoons. thatgirl..thanks for the loving support

    $$RICH$$..thanks wow when i started this i had no clue how it was gonna flow...glad you enjoyed this one

    Nita...gurl yeah shoot dont you know thats when ya dance ya best
    aint no beat:lol: thanks for the love

    watzinaname...thanks for the love

    Peace yall
    Angel
     
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    caramelpython Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    loved it

    rapture anew is your new groove or just a old move it seems like it's a bliss that just plain soothes, nothing missed nothing lost just the return of the circle to complete the parts. :grin:
     
  9. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Cp what am i gone do with you and that look you given off:lol:
    thanks for the love on dis
    Peace
    Angel
     
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    THEONE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    nice piece, :huh:
     
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