Quiet Poetry Lounge : Rapping it up...

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by queentswana, Sep 20, 2004.

  1. queentswana

    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    We all cried :crying: the day you left us here
    but you did not go alone...
    A part of our hearts :heart: went with you
    the day God said..."come home"
    :spinstar: :spinstar: :spinstar: :spinstar:
    It's time to "Rapp" up...all your pain
    leave all your fears behind
    I saw all the pain that you took in
    so I *quitely*...whispered your name
    :spinstar: :spinstar: :spinstar:
    I entered your room, like a thief in the night
    cause I heard your...*silent* cry :crying:
    and I waited til all, was fast asleep :sleep: ...
    then I gave you...your *wings* to fly
    :spinstar: :spinstar:
    Fly up, and "rapp" to the angels
    tell them how ~free~ you now feel
    thank you God...for having ~mercy~
    and Cyril the "rapper" is no longer ill
    :spinstar:
    In memory of my nephew...the "Rapper"​
     
  2. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    very touching heart felt and deeply i feel you more then u can know here
     
  3. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    very heartfelt flow....posed well with inner feelings....
     
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