Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by N2urSoul, Mar 10, 2002.
She was in college
and lost her virginity~
Ripped naked and stripped
and who have da rites to touch whats so pure !?
This is so sad. You write so deep. The last line of this haiku, (if read...truly read) will straiten the heart of the reader.
Thank you for the insightfulness of losing something so sacred as your virginity.
Joyce & $$Rich$$
I too thank you for both for reading & responding...
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