Black Poetry : Rape

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  1. imoonlitskies

    imoonlitskies Member MEMBER

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    Rape*

    From the earth to the sun
    From the bullet to the gun
    I'll never be outdone
    This war has just begun
    I'll never let you win
    Your lies are wearing thin
    Committing those moral sins
    You can't get through the tough skin

    From the sky to the ground
    From homebase to the mound
    You better turn around
    and rebound
    Because this 'G' just scored on YOU
    From the left to the right
    From the morning to the night
    You better look towards the light
    Cuz I ain't giving up the fight
    to keep this **** tight. v
     
  2. queentswana

    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hi and welcome imoonlitskies,
    relax and enjoy yourself ...to the world of friendly skies
    It's good to see you came aboard loaded...keep spraying the bullets
     
  3. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Strong message from an even stronger poet behind that pen I'm sure. Welcome to Destee!!! Hope you enjoy your stay.
     
  4. deepy

    deepy going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    twas tite...i want to say nice...but its sharper than that..
    thanks for coming and sharing...
     
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    gempis Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Welcome to the house of Destee! Tight drop - lookin forward to readin more of your stuff. :)
     
  6. Khasm13

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    interesting poem...
    keep em come'n poet
    one love
    khasm
     
  7. NNQueen

    NNQueen going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    Looks like we have another poetic warrior in the house! Welcome moonlit! I enjoyed your first piece!

    Queenie :spinstar:
     
  8. triniti424

    triniti424 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    welcome welcome welcome :)
    I see we got ourselves a thug warrior poet :)
    welcome home and give the poetic love to share the poetic love and let the circle be unbroken :)
     
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