Black Poetry : Ransom

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  1. skrybe7

    skrybe7 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    the moment is tenuous
    and light strings sinuously
    from a midafternoon sun
    and run from forever
    into soulful sounds
    the song she soothes
    and removes me from
    a savage world that
    shows a placid facade
    more than mirage
    in an arid land
    she is the iridescent
    melodic twists and turns
    that churn life within
    the deadness of me
    much more than
    a widow's memory
    beyond the harmonic
    words of a cruel heaven
    riding the winds of whimsy
    the music the song
    she is the beacon and guide
    past pathes worn by
    steps foul and treacherous
    the call beyond the endless
    footfalls that whisper shade
    and run from light
    my fine day and goodnight
    and these words are ransom
    to release a dead soul
    from a life of dreadful living
    without light
    and the song she sings me
    tangible kisses warm and wet
    and I send abstract missives
    to charm and set the existential
    chime of time and circumstantial sway
    the song she moves me
    like the stir of restless hips
    and thighs soft and supple
    slow to let me go
    a thrum of humidity
    woven in the empty universes
    between she and me
    and these words are ransom

    (c)07/03Michael
     
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    SwtT Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this is good poet...tyte flow!!!! :toast:
     
  3. skrybe7

    skrybe7 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanx SwtT.
    Peace
     
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    your words are humble, and your armor the strength of lions, the deep verses teaches the future and the past.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    str8 off da hook here words of a master
    tyte scribing poet..
     
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    dude...
    you wove a heavy @ss web
    with this piece...word
    peace
    khasm
     
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    skrybe7 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanx family
     
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    PlayWitItPimp05 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    yo
    this was heavy...
    big and heavy...
    lovin dis flow.

    :heart: :heart: PLAY :heart: :heart:
     
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    slow to let me go
    a thrum of humidity
    woven in the empty universes
    between she and me
    and these words are ransom

    Wow! This piece is but the articulation of "Beauty"
     
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    Sierra Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hey skrybe,

    This is a masterfully expressed piece!! Very well scribed Poet!!

    Peace to you!!

    ~Sierra~:heart:
     
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